Thursday, April 9, 2009

Men In Love. Comments

Rating: 4.4

It seems to depend on inherent traits
As to whether a man is skilled in word.

A British male, when in love, hardly states


Fay Slimm
Deva De Silva 16 April 2009

Witty and worldly... I'd have one of each! Loved it...

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Alison Cassidy 14 April 2009

This is such a playful little piece Fay with your hallmark mix of tongue in cheek and good ole commonsense. The final line makes a bright and breezy coda and the rest of the poem flows with just the right blend of the lyrical and the descriptive. Gorgeous poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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very inquisitive and straight to the point great job

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T S 13 April 2009

Bravo Fay I am with you every step of the way.. What is it with British Men who seem unable to voice their feelings... unless it involves Food, Sport or Beer 10 ++ (think I many have sent this twice)

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Bonnie Collins 11 April 2009

What a clever write, and so enjoyable. Your structure is so good, and the flow of humour at the end really placed the whole poem into perspective... Very nice job...

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Juneil Sechico 11 April 2009

I don't know 'bout British, French, latino whatsoever....All I know, when I'm in love, my stomach is filled with butterflies....Nice piece know a lot 'bout men! i enjoy reading it...

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to me i am a mix of them all.. i love this piece.

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Fiona Davidson 09 April 2009

There are of course exceptions to this rule lol...but on the whole me thinks you have it about right in this wonderful tongue in cheek write Fay...10+++

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Bob Blackwell 09 April 2009

Men in love with who....S?

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Kevin Wells 09 April 2009

Can't argue with any of that!

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