Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 674,138 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Mercy, Rain God - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Mercy O, rain God,

Down pour you shower,
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  • (8/6/2009 11:36:00 AM)

    pray rain for mercy on us....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/4/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    he will show some mercy on us....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/2/2009 8:26:00 AM)

    Down pour you shower,
    when there is no rain...10
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  • (8/2/2009 6:55:00 AM)

    Nothing will mushroom,
    things quite unimaginable...10
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  • (7/30/2009 9:08:00 AM)

    Down pour you shower,
    Nothing will be left but fewer,
    ....his mercy is must...10
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  • (7/26/2009 12:58:00 AM)

    'It will wipe out us from the face of earth,
    There is more danger and still no dearth,
    Nothing will grant us happy stay,
    If you remain calm and far away, '...i quoted these lines..this is nice to read..grace
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  • (7/25/2009 6:28:00 AM)

    Down pour you shower,
    Nothing will be left but fewer,
    We might have committed error,
    Forgive us forever and grant us favour...show some mercy to humanbeings...10
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  • (7/23/2009 11:50:00 AM)

    Dear poet, here pray for uplift and not insecure people at large. Good write. Shared and Enjoyed. (Report)Reply

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  • Luwi Habte (7/21/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    We will not survive for a moment,
    On your curse we can’t comment,
    Our mistakes we can only lament,
    Prayers all over is only our movement,
    i love this phrase, nice poem dear
    well done
    Luwi
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  • (7/19/2009 12:26:00 PM)

    Down pour you shower,
    Nothing will be left but fewer,
    beautiful.. prayer to rain god...10
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  • (7/19/2009 11:56:00 AM)

    Down pour you shower,
    Nothing will be left but fewer,
    god show us some mercy....10
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  • (7/17/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Starvation and death not your creation,
    We are responsible for its invention,
    We obstruct your natural flow,
    Disasters and destructions always grow,
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    Great one very well said as what we have planted in this humanity is what we are going to harvest in the future....The fate of us lies in our own hands.10+++
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  • (7/17/2009 9:50:00 AM)

    It will wipe out us from the face of earth,
    There is more danger and still no dearth,
    Nothing will grant us happy stay,
    If you remain calm and far away,

    Beautifully stated another amazing poem
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  • (7/15/2009 6:59:00 AM)

    Down pour you shower,
    Nothing will be left but fewer...u come o earth and shower us with your rain.. it is required her for our survival...10
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  • (7/15/2009 6:56:00 AM)

    Starvation and death not your creation,
    We are responsible for its invention,
    ... stasrvation and death may ocure and it is not ur domain...10.. very good poem
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  • (7/15/2009 6:52:00 AM)

    Nothing will mushroom,
    Flowers will not bloom,
    nothing will grow and it will be desert...10
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  • (7/15/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    We will not survive for a moment,
    .. inddeed we can't survide for long...10
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  • (7/15/2009 6:44:00 AM)

    We can nothing without you,
    can infac do nothing without u. this is universal fact...10
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  • (7/15/2009 6:26:00 AM)

    We will not survive for a moment,
    we can't survive for long if rain is not there...10
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  • (7/15/2009 6:19:00 AM)

    Down pour you shower,
    Nothing will be left but fewer, .... rain must show some merci to human kind/...10
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