jabberm alessawy

Rookie (1970 /07 / 1 / Baghdad)

Midnight - Poem by jabberm alessawy

Time is midnight
Ts time to surrender me to the worries and anxieties
Trying to overcome self traps
miles and miles of well made sneers
i roam among tree trunks dry and wet
looking into the black holes surrounding
descending down ana down unmeasured senses
of devouring feelings into the dark self
biting here and there to a false cover
a trance of pain.

Comments about Midnight by jabberm alessawy

  • Bert Bell (10/30/2010 10:59:00 PM)

    This is an excellent and intelligent poem. You write with thoughtful expression. 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • (7/30/2010 4:02:00 PM)

    it reminds of the aftermath of long battle
    where war has bitten the earth and senses
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  • (5/31/2010 11:09:00 PM)

    Very sad... and deep. Very well done. You are good poet. Keep up the good work. I know this was felt deep within you. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2010 1:05:00 PM)

    sad poem, good write, well done: 0) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 24, 2010

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