Friday, June 6, 2008

Midnight Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

our friendship was designed with nine lives
you have ruined eight and a half so far
you keep torturing me with needles and knives
but I’m not going to wear a single scar


Robert Miller
Jerry Hughes 16 November 2008

............nice flow of words, well done

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Kevin Eaglesfield 16 November 2008

Pain and bravado in equal measures.Know its bite.Like this poem.Regards.Kev

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