Friday, April 17, 2009

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ### Comments

Rating: 4.3

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2021

This poem marks you as great poet. Congratulations!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

Is it blessings to you or gift from Lord? Blessings are gift from the Lord, I reckon.5 Stars Full, Sir! I have enjoyed very much.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

I want to dance on floor with glass of wine. Lines full of humor in almost all lines, superbly written!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

am so much influenced by lady smile She has entered in life just before while' Life seems to be so interesting and fine I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2021

Life will be full of remorse but still I would forgo....practical. A great write sir...5 stars

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Sultan Mahmud 03 December 2020

It may be her way of thinking It left me high and dry with blinking What should I call her sacrifice? A step of dedication or break of promises? nice poem!

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Orike Didi 28 November 2020

This is a beautiful poem. It was also eventful.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2020

Poem: 16893249 - Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ### Member: Ogbajie Daniel Comment: Really nice sir Love the rhymes

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Ogbajie Daniel 09 November 2020

Really nice sir Love the rhymes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2020

Poem: 16893249 - Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ### Member: Suresh Kumar Comment: classical sir, Admirations

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Suresh Kumar Ek 12 September 2020

classical sir, Admirations

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Observant 04 January 2020

Did u know Magdaha Rani is Dillip Swain. He has manipulated the site to make Rani with 13 poems fourth in popularity. All he does is moan about others. He should be kicked off the site.

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Abhishek Singh 13 December 2019

Beautifully written sir...

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Bharat Jagwani 10 December 2019

nice lines... You also can read my poem Zindagi- Ek Paheli Thanks

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Chima Ononogbu 11 September 2019

Beautiful.

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A B Faniki 07 August 2019

Nice ballad. Thanks for sharing such lovely work. Thus a bit long. Cheers

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2019

Miss' I miss you but you don't miss, Did not expect from you kind hug or simple kiss Not even kind gesture or more of any show Still I miss you and never beat eye brow....outstanding conceptualization. A great poem is amazingly shared. Thank you dear sir for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

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Anu Mehta 11 June 2019

Nice one Thank for sharing the poem with us..

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Archita Kumar 15 May 2019

Very wonderful poem.Its a sort of sarcastic love poem.You are blaming her but not blaming her also. The deep impact of thoughts with real emotions have been captured in this poem.Thank for sharing the poem with us.

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Prabir Gayen 08 May 2019

It may be her way of thinking It left me high and dry with blinking What should I call her sacrifice? A step of dedication or break of promises.. ...very beautiful poem..thanks

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