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Mom's Smiles

Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
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  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (6/17/2017 1:26:00 PM)

    Cry for mother whom.you miss much in your life
    Smile which always remains in your memory
    A heart touching poem..wow

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(6/17/2017 2:51:00 PM)

    kindness and love come from the heart
    of this solitary world
    each one of us is a part
    you also are
    a younger poet of art
    wow to u 2

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (6/14/2017 12:35:00 PM)

    This is my second visit to this great piece of poetry. Emotional and heartfelt. Mothers leave a big void when they depart for their final abode. A son or a daughter who were emotionally attached to her, miss their mother more than anybody else. Thanks a lot, Dear poet, for sharing the poem.
    my eyes.... Then it rained all day and night
    as she passed away / it rains till today / nearly five decades away

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(6/14/2017 1:26:00 PM)

    Thank you Rajnish
    grateful many across the GLOBE have liked it
    Regards

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  • Queeny GonaQueeny Gona (6/1/2017 12:48:00 AM)

    Heart touching poem and is in-fact a wonderful dedication to MOM. You have paid tribute to your mom in beautiful way!

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(6/2/2017 8:27:00 AM)

    kindness is a virtue
    we all must ensure
    kindness gives solace to both giver and receiver and Q G ur one in a million ALL moms are
    Thank you

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (5/26/2017 10:18:00 AM)

    thank you all for making my mom SMILE

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/22/2016 3:05:00 PM)

    sad a 10mark poetry has been reduced to a mere 5
    with such emotional and sentimental comments
    honestly 'tis sad

    some thing wrong with this sites evaluation system

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    Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga(10/23/2016 9:47:00 AM)

    I find that the Admin has changed the marking system.5 is the maximum that a poem can secure now as against 10 earlier. You may please check-up other poets' poems.

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (10/19/2016 1:59:00 AM)

    nearly five decades away
    she still smiles daily at me.... / An amazing piece of poetry about a departed mother. Within her smiles, how sad is her longing for her son who is still missing her warmth even after such a long time living without her. The mother is waiting for her son to join her after his earthly journey:

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(10/22/2016 3:01:00 PM)

    kindness and thanks some memories are as fresh as butter is always thanks Rajnish

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  • Marie ShineMarie Shine (9/2/2016 1:32:00 AM)

    A beautiful tribute to Mom who passed to Spirit smiling, happy to be returning home again. Now, it is almost time for the poet to join his beloved Mother in Spirit, he is looking forward to meeting her again and being with her. He too smiles. The love the poet has for his Mom is tangible in this excellently penned poem. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing...

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(10/22/2016 3:02:00 PM)

    How do you know i am about to go thanks to u also

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  • Jasbir ChatterjeeJasbir Chatterjee (8/26/2016 2:03:00 AM)

    Such a poignant poem...Thanks for sharing it...

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(8/26/2016 7:40:00 PM)

    THANK YOU GRATEFUL JASBIR MA'AM

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  • Tapan M. SarenTapan M. Saren (8/3/2016 7:27:00 PM)

    I know that pain. I've lost my mom 15 years ago. Well done. Beautiful poem

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(8/3/2016 9:31:00 PM)

    thank u Tapan this is my bestest poem
    i lost mine 48 years ago

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (2/10/2016 9:02:00 PM)

    Mothers are irreplaceable and when they die they leave great longings in our hearts. You have expressed this reality well in your poem!

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(2/10/2016 9:14:00 PM)

    thank you so much when I see a woman not gal I see in her my mom ty tc gb

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  • Afrooz JafarinoorAfrooz Jafarinoor (1/8/2016 1:50:00 PM)

    Thank you for reading one of my poems that led me here to be deeply impressed! I love this poem; a big 10!

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(1/8/2016 8:23:00 PM)

    One smile
    is all that I am asking for
    can't you give such a simple smile to me
    I am as lovely
    as is the sea
    at her you smile and wink
    I always see


    come smile if not at me
    maybe
    smile with me
    could ye!




    AN UNDERSTANDING CEO


    When we are great
    week ends have to be
    and so on
    Monday possibly late
    we could be


    the CEO would understand it
    when he was young
    this always did happen
    now he is not told
    but remembers days those


    so he ensures to come an hour late
    so that he doesn't
    catch a comer
    who is now coming after his date


    so enjoy with your date
    come over to me
    so far I am still lonely
    no one has asked for a date
    ever with me


    One smile
    is all that I am asking for
    can't you give such a simple smile to me
    I am as lovely
    as is the sea
    at her you smile and wink
    I always see


    come smile if not at me
    maybe
    smile with me
    could ye!




    AN UNDERSTANDING CEO


    When we are great
    week ends have to be
    and so on
    Monday possibly late
    we could be


    the CEO would understand it
    when he was young
    this always did happen
    now he is not told
    but remembers days those


    so he ensures to come an hour late
    so that he doesn't
    catch a comer
    who is now coming after his date


    so enjoy with your date
    come over to me
    so far I am still lonely
    no one has asked for a date
    Unless we poets read each others poetry who will know us tell me please



    will ye?

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  • Pamela SinicropePamela Sinicrope (1/8/2016 5:32:00 AM)

    I love the way you remember your mom's smiles and then incorporate heaven, the rain, the snow. Very comforting. Thanks for sharing!

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(1/8/2016 9:49:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot Pams

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (1/5/2016 6:37:00 AM)

    Very touching and soulful. Mother's live eternally in every heart.

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(1/5/2016 11:28:00 AM)

    thanks a lot CPS you don't know how much it matters coming from stalwarts like you

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (12/11/2015 2:41:00 AM)

    Your mother staying in a faraway land still looks over you and she is waiting for that happy moment when her son will get reunited with her in the kingdom of eternal happiness! A touching write!

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(12/11/2015 11:26:00 AM)

    thank u so much
    i see her daily smiling at me
    soon she will smile with me
    who knows
    ty tc gb

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  • Abdulrazak AralimattiAbdulrazak Aralimatti (12/10/2015 11:14:00 PM)

    Verily, a heart touching poem,
    Highly emotional and divine...10

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(12/11/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    if this has touched your heart
    of mine ur now a part
    ty tc frindly one

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (12/10/2015 4:02:00 PM)

    This is very emotional to have scene of mom passing away by giving smile. Tear comes and also do not come by getting happy blessings from mother. Recalling mom's last eyes dips reader in deep emotion definitely. Such memory is nice tribute mom. A mother is ever higher than heaven. Nice drafting shared.10

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(12/11/2015 11:29:00 AM)

    and i bow to u
    for ur love and blessings too

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  • Kewayne WadleyKewayne Wadley (12/7/2015 10:47:00 AM)

    Very sentimental write.
    I am so glad I came across this tender piece!
    It gave me the biggest smile.
    Thanks so much for sharing
    KW

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(12/11/2015 11:52:00 AM)

    and i needed to smile too ty tc gb u

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (12/6/2015 1:36:00 AM)

    In our Scriptures it is said, Mother and motherland is greater than heaven. Great submission for any Mom.

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(12/6/2015 10:07:00 PM)

    thank you RR

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  • Akhtar Jawad (12/4/2015 9:39:00 PM)

    A nice and touching poem, a beautiful description of a son's emotions for her mother.

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(12/6/2015 10:07:00 PM)

    thanks AJ

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  • Mj Lemon (11/30/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    Wonderfully melancholy. I really like this poem.

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(12/11/2015 11:54:00 AM)

    what a lovely comment Lemon

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