This is my second visit to this great piece of poetry. Emotional and heartfelt. Mothers leave a big void when they depart for their final abode. A son or a daughter who were emotionally attached to her, miss their mother more than anybody else. Thanks a lot, Dear poet, for sharing the poem.
my eyes.... Then it rained all day and night
as she passed away / it rains till today / nearly five decades away
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me.... / An amazing piece of poetry about a departed mother. Within her smiles, how sad is her longing for her son who is still missing her warmth even after such a long time living without her. The mother is waiting for her son to join her after his earthly journey:
A beautiful tribute to Mom who passed to Spirit smiling, happy to be returning home again. Now, it is almost time for the poet to join his beloved Mother in Spirit, he is looking forward to meeting her again and being with her. He too smiles. The love the poet has for his Mom is tangible in this excellently penned poem. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing...
This is very emotional to have scene of mom passing away by giving smile. Tear comes and also do not come by getting happy blessings from mother. Recalling mom's last eyes dips reader in deep emotion definitely. Such memory is nice tribute mom. A mother is ever higher than heaven. Nice drafting shared.10