Mourning is loss. I appreciate how you can share your painful loss of your mother in a thoughtful poem. In the second stanza, did you mean, I can see my mom smiling at me? Just curious. English is my first language. So, I try to assist when i can. Peace...
Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away.....visit again for your dear mom's Smile//
My lips smiled but I heart wept as I read your poem. Your mom must have been a beautiful person to be so well prepared for death and to be constantly watching and waiting at heaven's Gate for you.
Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed exploring the feelings with you.
It's a sweet poem on mom dear anonymous poet. It's unique in its style.
Clearly shows how much you your mom. Really enjoyed reading it sir.
Thank you for sharing such beautiful poem...10+rated and voted
A great ode to a mom by his beloved son who sees her smile in the drops of rain.
Mother so simple
Live in my heart
Of love and care
Woven with her unseen labor
Ever since she conceived me
Well penned poem.
She loved me as her own.
Mother so dear
Never left me alone
Ever since I desire
She comes in my dream
Smiling like an angel
Taking away all my pain.