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Mom's Smiles

Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
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Topic(s) of this poem: love


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  • Ted Crump (5/9/2020 1:52:00 AM)

    Worst poem on this site. Learn to write jackass!

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  • Soumee SarkarSoumee Sarkar (5/7/2020 2:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem about mom's love and support...

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  • Sankar SarkarSankar Sarkar (4/29/2020 4:44:00 AM)

    Exquisitely written! Imbued with aesthetic and realistic pathos. Poet's thought and emotion get anchored deeply, besides, his poetic acumen and acuity is prevalent across the poem that easily touches the fond readers hearts …… keep on writing such great pieces! !

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  • Jagdish Singh RamánaJagdish Singh Ramána (4/26/2020 9:54:00 AM)

    I just loved...







    I just loved...

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (4/26/2020 6:44:00 AM)

    its drifting slowly MORE MUST READ AND COMMENT THIS MOMS SMILES IS REALL NOT AN IMAGERY O POETS
    Jagdish Singh Ramána
    Jagdish Singh Ramána
    (4/24/2020 12: 25: 00 PM)

    Again it makes me emotional.
    All the theories are failed that poem should be written in metre. Spontaneous overflow works. Love! ! ! ! ! ! You dear Poet! ! ! Youth for all age!

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  • Evi Prinou (4/25/2020 5:09:00 AM)

    I love your style...narrative with rythm. excellent

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  • Jagdish Singh RamánaJagdish Singh Ramána (4/24/2020 12:25:00 PM)

    Again it makes me emotional.
    All the theories are failed that poem should be written in metre. Spontaneous overflow works. Love! ! ! ! ! ! You dear Poet! ! ! Youth for all age! ! ! ! !

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (4/24/2020 10:41:00 AM)

    Truly, the acme of sentimentalism has been reached! Incredible and heart-touching. thanks young man read more comment more then thank all for sure to ensure

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  • Muzahidul RezaMuzahidul Reza (4/24/2020 6:22:00 AM)

    it rains till today
    nearly five decades away
    she still smiles daily at me
    I my mom can see
    smiling with me,

    TOUCHING LINES, excellent piece of poetry

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (4/24/2020 12:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful sentiments, others love never dies.

    Mother on earth,
    The first incarnate;
    The body decays
    But her spirit eternally vibrates.

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  • Vaibhav SimhaVaibhav Simha (4/22/2020 10:50:00 AM)

    Truly, the acme of sentimentalism has been reached! Incredible and heart-touching.

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (4/22/2020 2:50:00 AM)

    Thank you thank you and thanks to all the world's poets who have tremendously loved this poem.myBOWS AND REGARDS. YOU ALL have been so kind
    to read my poem and poems GOD BLESS YOU ALL..
    Sylvia Frances Chan
    (4/22/2020 1: 07: 00 AM)

    Poem Number 399 on Top 500 Poems TODAY, Sir! WOW! What an achievement. I THOUGHT you were only asking me to READ at the very beginning...REGARDS FOR THIS INFORMATION I WOULD Have never known

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (4/22/2020 1:26:00 AM)

    3) I cite your words in the first stanza:
    tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled.......................INDEED, that was so, I DID NOT CRY either, BUT till TODAY I am still saddest about her death. Today I can tell you how most beautiful poem this is from your deepest inside. You are a true good son, Sir. Now you can utter yourself at last and we as readers are impressed very much, because this poem reminds us at our OWN MOM's DEATH.Amazing poem, Sir!

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (4/22/2020 1:15:00 AM)

    2) Now I have read this poem again, I DO UNDERSTAND and FEEL the emotions that comes forth from this seemingly too melancholic poem. Today this poem reminds me of my own beloved Mom's death some years ago, no...............not decades ago, but SOME YEARS AGO, these last days especially when the days become warmer, I am oftentimes thinking of she, today I can tell you dear SIR: I understand that YOU are STILL SAD.

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (4/22/2020 1:07:00 AM)

    Poem Number 399 on Top 500 Poems TODAY, Sir! WOW! What an achievement. I THOUGHT you were only asking me to READ at the very beginning, but when I have given comment, you did not know that and ASKED me again to give this poem my comment, and I said to you I HAD DONE THAT DEAR SIR! And look now, your poem is on TOP 500 POEMS because this poem is indeed so very sad that it reminds my OWN MOM's death

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  • Evelyn Judy BuehlerEvelyn Judy Buehler (4/19/2020 7:29:00 PM)

    Such a well written poem, expressing the memory of a loving mother, and sadness at her passing.

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  • Rajendran MuthiahRajendran Muthiah (4/19/2020 6:29:00 AM)

    Sir, poet's poet! Your mother could not have asked you, " when are you coming? " . Her smiles stopped when miseries after miseries rained. Her smiles passed away before she did. In your mind still she smiles and cheers you. That is a mother. You go to her abode after hitting a century. To make us cheerful, you must be around.

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  • Harindhar Reddy (4/19/2020 5:32:00 AM)

    What wonderful poem on mother expressing proud love on her. We don't often such poem on mother. Last I saw was Kushwant Singh prose on her mother. Very impressive with pure love on mother. Wonderful 👍👍👍

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  • Dominic WindramDominic Windram (4/11/2020 1:48:00 PM)

    Deeply poignant sentiments expressed here...I feel your loss!

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (4/6/2020 8:32:00 AM)

    I love and profoundly admire this endearing piece of work! My pleasure visiting this great poem time and again!

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