Thursday, May 18, 2006

Moments Comments

Rating: 2.9

Theres a gentle song to your stressful day,
When the sultriness of rolling wind can't be turned away.
What a captivating moment
And it sees me through,

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Rain Storm
COMMENTS
Rani Turton 03 April 2008

Expressive poem of love. Keep it up Rain Storm.

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***** ********* 18 May 2006

Third stanza 'one' missing at the end of first line. Tidy up the punctuation and you have a sweet poem of loving, just don't expect too much. It is a bad idea. Believe me! Tai

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