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Saturday, May 18, 2013

~ Monica Leuneske_Y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ Comments

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~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~

[‘Power is the great aphrodisiac’ ~ Henry Kissinger*]

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MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
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Ralph The Elf 22 December 2013
WOW! ! ! im shaken by this, too much power
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Friday, Happy Oyamenda 11 October 2013
Nivedita, I've been following the Lewisky scandal for years, I never thought it could pass for a poem until now. Really the poem is very rich with literary elements that make up a beautiful poem-metaphor, personification, etc. Really homourous and soul.
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Queeny Gona 25 September 2013
Such a poignant write! Each line is as powerful as a tight punch..... I am happy for the foot notes provided below. I wish you read and leave yr valuable comments on my poems that fall on similar lines ^ I am She^, Feminine. Thanks in advance!
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Meera Panigrahi 18 September 2013
Such a powerful and very rightly expressed comment on the Male disorientation which arises out of the power that they possess. it is true that power is an aphrodisiac. The poem moved me to great anguish and concern for women's security.
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Amitabha Bagchi 06 September 2013
======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Victor Adex To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann Date-Time: 9/5/2013 5: 39: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 'twas a great write, I could almost comprehend it all, but some of it still eludes me I would be glad if u graciously read ny poem ~ EQUAL FOR GREATNESS I do happen to be feminist, and I have philosophies that infer equity. ~~~ Posted thru kindness of AB London n
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Rich Foss 05 September 2013
Ms. Nivedita, Thanks for pointing me to your poem. Powerful and painful
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Shraddha The Poetess 02 September 2013
a good read.......very very nicely expressed.... although i agree with u...now a days crime against women like sexual assault is increasing day by day............... as thinking of some cheap people is taking women as material not as a human................so this needs a change in our society........and i appriciate u for choosing this topic...............well done...............
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Stephen Loomes 26 August 2013
Hunger can lead to cannabalism but in its milder form, is the drive which sustains us; sexual desire for women in men can lead to the extremes about which you write, but in its milder form can bond a man and a woman for life and create a stable family and future generartions; it is a spectrum the way hunger manifests itself, and in that spectrum there will always be beauty and ugliness. The aperture through which you look models your perception.Remember this next time you partake.
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Claudia Krizay 23 August 2013
My Dream 2 If I could see beyond the clouds and if I were alone to see the world the way I had always dreamed it would appear-tree trunks would be colored crimson red and Emerald green, perhaps intertwined with shades of cobalt blue-as would be the sky- I see myself alone at daybreak with the sun Shining brilliantly reflecting light from the horizon To the creek below- I could hear voices singing Hauntingly tuneful arias to which I would joyfully sing along- This would be the solitude I had always yearned for and Left behind would be the rage and suspicion I had been living with for so many years before- To be part of nature and to hear melodious bird songs While a gentle breeze would rustle the leaves upon the trees- In my fondest dreams I would be the queen of this world, and Alone except for the voices inside of my mind- Those voices which my thoughts control and have always controlled- The laughter that we share and here in this place where I would rule and have the say in whatever is or shall be happening- There would be not threats, injuries, or betrayal here- However in reality- who knows what exists beyond these clouds and Nobody can be certain when promises shall be broken or when Evil shall cross the pathway we walk every single day? If I were alone in this fabricated world I have created inside of my mind I would not have a care, I would sing songs to celebrate freedom and I would run down paths of righteousness never fearing People crossing the path before me or intruders following close behind me- I could use all of my strength right now to wish away the wicked people Who have cruelly taken over this world and robbed me of my peace of mind- Alas, all I can do is to keep my eyes closed to veracity and Paint pictures with the thoughts that are so active inside of my mind because In actuality I am amongst that population –however, as well as, the one forsaken- Tonight all that I can do is to sing peaceful lullabies and remind myself that In my dreams this place meant for me alone exists beyond those clouds- As my fantasies rock me to sleep, thunder claps, and even though Rain begins to fall and I hear cars speeding down the boulevard outside- My eyes are tightly shut as would be the door to the world out there- and I believe that momentarily- my thoughts shall become in control once more- I shall be traveling beyond those clouds from which rain would never fall. There shall be a colorful rainbow on the horizon illuminating the sky In a very special way welcoming me back to the place that I call my home. Claudia Krizay
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Claudia Krizay 23 August 2013
can't relate- don't understand what you are trying to express- interesting flow, however.
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Alookh (matin) 18 August 2013
mm..yas...completely right...it's a real concerning issue...i read ur poem...thank u for inviting...but it was a bit difficult for me to understand all the sentenses...(English is not my mother tongue) ! ! ...i really like to do sthing or find a way for this social problem...but i don't know how.what should we do?
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Dipy Hermonite 17 August 2013
Very interesting read. Written in a unique style. Would urge you to read my poem Your World My Lord
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Amitabha Bagchi 07 August 2013
======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: George Price To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 8/7/2013 3: 34: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hi, Your poem is an interesting one. It connects rather cleverly with primal and earthy subjects. I do like poetry to sound good, and yours certainly does that when read aloud. So in general I was impressed. However, Lewinsky was spelt differently to normal, which confused me at first (were you making an intentional statement? I'm not sure, and looking back on it I suspect so, but it did throw me) . I also thought occasionally a complex word was used where a simple would have done. But generally I enjoyed being challenged and reading your poem aloud. Thank you for sharing it with me. Could I also invite you to take a look at my stuff? Not nearly as much as yours, and certainly not the quality, but I thought you might enjoy something like 'Stillness', my take on modern life? Anyway, thank you for taking the time to read this. GHPrice (George) ~~~ Posted thru AB London
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Douglas Scotney 03 August 2013
Instead of the gamma rays which could be used unjustly against the innocent by crazed handlers who think innocence doesn't exist, how about throwing your invective at research that will limit man's horniness to coincide with woman's; once or twice a year. Everyone could let all hang loose, then survivors could return to civilization. I suppose that would lead to stockpiling of arms and defensives. Perhaps you're right, every guy castrated at birth and a science fiction future.
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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2013
I agree that the violence must stop against women. You seem to have things well in hand, and are on a different level than I am. Being an automatic writer I only write what I am inspired to write. Understanding does not come to me when reading your poems - and I read quite a few of them. Your words jumble inside my mind looking for meaning and I can't always see your connections. In the future I will come back and read your poetry to see if it gels or gives me concrete definition of what you are trying to say. Please keep writing and hopefully we'll meet on the same path down the road. Every poet has their own style and we're not meant to understand each one. Remember the poets from grade and high school? Their meanings weren't always clear to us either. Even the famous ones! Take care and don't give up the fight. RoseAnn
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======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Deepak Sawhney To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 7/30/2013 2: 27: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~ Nivedita, May I add a few thoughts on the content of the poem. a) Without a doubt Billy ol' bean exploited his good office b) Monica - an intern wished to climb up the ladder using the shortest path. As such she too was an active participant in the ghastly event. c) In the given circumstances, you may not have a huge fan following in the cause that you wish to espouse. d) I fully endorse the macro picture/the underlying sentiment that women world over are exploited & it's about time they became aware of this fact. Maybe for a poem on this theme, an abstract would be better suited. Do consider. Best wishes & happy writing Dee ~~~ Rejoinder by niv Hon'ble Poet Sir Thanks for your educative notes...helping me lot and will help in future I hope. Regarding Cannibalism, I was deactivated by PH from posting a few of my poems. Since then I'm writing 'Poet under threat of editorial cannibalism'. I'd to make typographical changes several time to post my poem to reach and communicate my learned readers. You'll be surprised to note I'm cordoned to comment on poem of poets in open forum. I know Hindu scripture writes, 'Sheryanshi Vahu Vighnani' [may be with spelling errors] stands for Good things face many obstacles. My Indian rearing exactly formed my psyche as 'UN- put-downable' so I'll fight for a cause. Incidentally may I say, Monica as you said, was looking for a short-cut for her promotion. But what about Billy the Prez of most powerful nation of the world is so vulnerable to prey of entice [this is debatable who enticed first] of an intern. I indeed pity Prez's self restrain, and who can't restrain himself form woman's provocation how he'll rule the America nay world. I must say Billy set a very bad example but didn't resign from the post [as in Judiciary it stayed unproved...I think trick of power played a foul game to give justice to Monica] Contrary you must remember Christina scandal in UK led to resignation of Profumo in the House Of Lords. Best regards Yours in Poetry niv Posted thru courtesy of R
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Amitabha Bagchi 30 July 2013
* ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Deepak Sawhney To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann Date-Time: 7/30/2013 12: 27: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Nivedita...please do give me the privilege to call you that (since you are younger than my younger son) . A poem for a very fair & just cause, certainly deserves all the accolades. With you with all my might on that score. The poem per se...I am sure that you are aware that for a lesser mortal, it would need two or more readings to be able to get into synch with you (I did read it twice) . Must say a very subtle use of phraseology & words... more so the _ part. The title is so apt. In a lighter vein, the 'keep silent not please' brought a smile 'cause it reminded me of Yoda from Star Wars. Excellent - please do keep up with the great poetic expression of your thoughts. Will keep a track of your other works. I just joined the forum & am in the process of uploading my poems. Not too familiar with the site as yet: -) Dee ~~~ Posted thru kindness of AB London
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Amitabha Bagchi 27 July 2013
======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Lee Mack To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 7/26/2013 8: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - oui... Honor mother and honor father or tempt respect Mutually... How many loaves can we eat? Say who has many to feed... - - Posted thru kindness of AB London
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======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Alex Kenneh To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 7/26/2013 1: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: ~ Monica Leuneske_y Monologues Zigzag Why? ~ niv ~ UK ~ Understandable, however so are minorities. Then why stop there, fight for everyone being targeted. ~~~ Posted thru kindness of dr. sakti
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Your style of writting is unique. It is truly a pleasure to read such diversity. Thank you for sharing
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