Saturday, September 5, 2009

Moon, Moon, Crazy Moon Comments

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moon, moon, crazy moon
natural moon
torn apart and snoozing moon;
lovely moon, romantic moon

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Thabang Mokoena 07 March 2019

Amazing I really like it

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Siyabonga Sam 16 May 2018

Wounderful poem -I really like it .

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Siyabonga Sam 16 May 2018

Wounderful poem - I really like it ..

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Siyabonga Sam 16 May 2018

Wounderful poem - I really like it ..

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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2017

Beautiful sonorous train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2016

Our very own earth's moon! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Terry Craddock 19 June 2016

'torn apart and snoozing moon' mooning here over a few of your lines, one of the most original lunar imagery poems I have ever read

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Thrishal Suvarana 26 May 2014

Stream of consciousness... I personally place them near the level of rambling ' an old woman hag of a moon ' hehe! lol. Very creative. I like it.

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Philip Lee 04 June 2012

Stream of consciousness... I personally place them near the level of rambling

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Milica Franchi De Luri 05 September 2009

' an old woman hag of a moon ' hehe! lol. Very creative. I like it.

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Catrina Heart 05 September 2009

just love this poem..............great to read the forms and lines, it sparks my mind! ! ! 10+++++++++

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