Just another poet
writing about the moon...
a place he's never been,
never truly seen.
Meanwhile, his heart
is peeling away from his life
like paint from the walls
of a cheap hotel.
Like paint from the walls. Nice work.
Your 'Moon Poem' is uniquely your own. Thank you for sharing. Kindest regards, Sandra
has a poignant quality. in art, it would fit with a simple woodblock-type of print
lovely in a moon way. i love moon poem jimi. a lovely poem read and i went looking for the moon
So sad and so very beautiful...there is nothing wrong with your colors - stay the way you are Pia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Ah but the moon is not all it shows and so I am sure are you... and a cheap hotel can look so smart with a fresh coat of paint... just a phase you are going through.... Alison