Elizabeth Monroe

More Of A Dad

Why aren't you here dad?
Your never here are you.
In the end you always left me sad.
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  • Keith Hendrickson (7/29/2009 5:35:00 PM)

    another passionate piece from you. i cant wait for you to post more. i love your work so far.

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  • Broken Heart (7/17/2009 3:14:00 AM)

    sweet! !
    really touched me! ! : D
    nyc!
    10++

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (7/13/2009 1:05:00 AM)

    Pangs of unfaithful father and in praise of a sincere step father. The poetess shines through the poem

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  • Bele Lele (7/11/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    Sad but nice.I like sad poems good job!

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  • Barry A. LanierBarry A. Lanier (4/26/2009 1:45:00 AM)

    an evocative penning full of catharsis and pain..so many of us have of childhood memories......

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