Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 287 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Mother's Gift - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

I look upon this summer sky
A night so dark and bright!
Wanders a thought eleventh May
Mother’s day in my mind

Years now her I lost since
Mother my so dear
Stare my eyes the sky above
A thousand stars alight!

Among the glow and glitter there
One star I find differs
That sends down cool and loving gaze;
Feel whispers soothing words

The love and care so missing long
Drift on me through air
I get a gift on Mother’s Day!
My mother right up there!

Comments about Mother's Gift by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (1/20/2010 1:01:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem indeed! Mother's are very precious. Their presence in life is indispensible no matter how old you are.....
    Great work!
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  • (5/25/2009 5:37:00 AM)

    very bueatiful lines, deep meaning,
    i like it, thanks a lot
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  • (5/17/2009 10:02:00 PM)

    lovely write sir..i got to this poem a little reminds me of tagore's in which he sees his mom in the meadows (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2009 1:59:00 AM)

    very beautiful.. i just she cried in heaven when you completed this... beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2009 12:50:00 PM)

    Great poem Kesav, you wrote it from your's so obvious....lovely to read..Merna (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2009 5:20:00 AM)

    you were right i did enjoy it.... thankyou.... So beautiful and decriptive it was lovely... (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2009 1:35:00 AM)

    This is such an inspirational poem Kesav. To know her love reflects right back to you from above.
    The one star that differs and send you her special love. Beautiful words for a beautifully Mother.
    Karin Anderson 10/10
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  • Meggie Gultiano (5/2/2009 9:53:00 PM)

    Among the glow and glitter there
    One star I find differs
    That sends down cool and loving gaze;
    Feel whispers soothing words

    I find this very touching and it pulls my heart string. As i can also relate to this, ..sometimes, i look up to the sky, pretending that one of the stars there is my mother looking down at me whispering words that puts me to sleep in peace..Thanks for this sharing
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  • (4/7/2009 2:03:00 AM)

    a truely excellent write..brought back memories of my mother who too should be there....10 (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (3/31/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    Kesav- a truly beautiful poetic tribute to your dear Mother....I enjoy reading your are indeed gifted.10+++
    I also want to thank you for all the kind comments that you have been posting on my work... I am deeply encouraged to keep writing..when I hear from you..
    Kind regards
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  • Ahmad Shiddiqi (11/25/2008 12:00:00 PM)

    we love and care for mothers. very well done! keep writing! could you comment on mine too? thank you. (Report) Reply

  • C.R. Clark (11/22/2008 4:51:00 AM)

    A beautiful tribute to a very special lady.Mothers are most surely God's special gift to their children. Thank you, my friend.
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  • (11/2/2008 2:31:00 AM)

    Mother is always diefferent than all other.... good piece of work... :) (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2008 2:51:00 AM)

    ooooh it is lovely and great poem
    it impressed in my heart i like it
    the heaven under mother's feet
    well done
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  • (9/26/2008 12:43:00 PM)

    A thoughtful son's loving composition...touched my heart for this...This is priceless and no rate could match to...I'll just give u a kiss. Lol! ! ! ! joke. (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (7/28/2008 4:50:00 AM)

    ____________________your poem brings tears in my eyes______________
    _______________________and no marks for this_____________________10
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  • (6/10/2008 12:37:00 AM)

    To me she continues to send her gifts from her heavenly aboard! (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (5/26/2008 12:03:00 AM)

    great feeling for 'love lost' but again she is up in the skies...i like it (Report) Reply

  • Dipika P (5/22/2008 6:22:00 AM)

    ial say in one word..'awesome' (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2008 5:07:00 AM)

    brilliant poem, love of mother is unique and the rest in those expressive lines, great work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, September 26, 2008

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