Julie A Smith

Rookie - 203 Points (Illinois)

Mud On My Shoe (A Poem About Regret) - Poem by Julie A Smith

I walk alone.
Sometimes the day is sunny.
Sometimes the day is cloudy.
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem was written on March 9,2012. It was inspired by personal sadness and regret of the poet (and her wishing that she could make things right) .

Comments about Mud On My Shoe (A Poem About Regret) by Julie A Smith

  • Dipy Hermonite (9/24/2013 5:06:00 AM)

    I loved the poem Julie. Great write. Have rated it.
    Could you read and rate my poem. Link is given below

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/contest-vote/your-world-my-lord/
    Regards
    Dipy
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/4/2012 3:22:00 PM)

    Impressive display of free-verse...Crisp, tight structural movement glides mellifluously..Rue is an element of life that unless we know for a fact that we have not done the right thing, is an element that we tend to unfairly level on ourselves due to that Would've...Should've...Could'veconcept that we all fall victim to...A fine penning, young lady ~FjR~ (Report)Reply

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  • Captain Cur (7/4/2012 2:51:00 PM)

    Even if you can't make things right. Getting out the feeling will help.
    Good poem, I felt the pain and longing and regret.
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