Denise Veras

Rookie (New York City)

Music Man - Poem by Denise Veras

Music man oh music man

I hear you, a sweet harmonious sound.
A sonata, a magnum opus of exquisite mysteries

Music man oh music man

Let me fill your notes with my vocal picturesque soul.
Any note played with you, I know I’ll hold.

This linear musical structure couldn’t be better synchronized
I aim to mesmerize hypnotize that lucid drum now stabilized

Can you see it, imagine it?
Dare to make a sweet tune in this duo with it.
I just can’t see anything other than a great masterpiece,
a symphony you’d be insane to miss.

Music man oh music man

Its time, time to tell you how your melody
It leads me to feel a case of charity.
It’s with you I want to write this song
I now I can’t stay long, my studio time is almost gone

Music man oh music man
My stage fright is now mild,
I sing to make that heart smile
So are you in, do you have my missing 6 bars
This is an invitation to reach the stars

Music man oh music man

I need to know how this lustful song will flow
My impatience, this need for exclamation,
a little information is making it hard to cope.

Music man, is this more than a just song?

Comments about Music Man by Denise Veras

  • (5/14/2007 9:26:00 PM)

    Wow I have never heard music described beautifully. That was great. I have a oral interpretation speech in class tomorrow and I hope you dont mind if I use your poem for it(with credit to you as the author of course) (Report) Reply

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  • (5/11/2007 5:07:00 PM)

    Compliments of the day to you.
    I am Miss nenita fred I am single,23yrs.However How are you? hope you are fine and in perfect condition of health.I went through your profile and i read it and took intersest in it, if you don't mind i will like to know you much better, although i came online to look for a true and loving man that is ready for a true, honest and loving relationship and will be able to take good care of me if you are the kind of man am talking about then send me a mail now on my private email ( included, so that i will tell you all about myself and a picture of myself.looking forward to hear from you, thanks and God bless
    miss nenita
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  • (10/21/2005 1:09:00 PM)

    very good, and specially 'cause i am a musician. i play alto sax.

    please, read mines and let me know your opinion about 'em
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 21, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, October 21, 2005

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