Thursday, November 15, 2012
My Dandy Lines Comments
Rating: ★5.0
My dandy lines grow fair and bright
With some space and a shot of light
My cheerful field yields joy and pleasure
One man's nuisance transformed into treasure
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Cynthia Buhain-baello
15 November 2012
Interesting last lines but the poem holds its theme well. Very good word choices and creative imagery, remarkably written to convey a meaningful message and the witty Dandy Lines title -dandelions of poetry.10++++++++
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3/12/2026 4:28:18 PM # 1.0.0
This is great, I prefer the yellow weeds too :) Your words clearly paint the beauty you see in them.