My Desired Lover Poem by vic andy

My Desired Lover

Rating: 4.5


The sun stood still as i took a glimpse at you,
My heart bumped into yours with a melodious song,
My heart beat with the rhythm of your smile,
You pressed your soft lips on mine, which made me soar in the galaxy,
The love i felt is strong as a rock,

Your eyes are like glittering apples in the settings of silver,
I moon over the special kiss you planted on my scarlet lips,
Memories of you are my secret and the dreams i cherished were all about you,
Your touch is softer than a sigh and forever will i love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vic Andy 10 January 2012

wonderful piece of writing very creative

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 June 2011

Great poem. Nice sentiments. Skilfully conceived. Rich in imagery. I liked it. A fine 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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