Jazlle D. H.

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My Eyes - Poem by Jazlle D. H.

This poem is for Abeer, one of my tutees and a grade 3 student, asked me to write a poem for her school project.


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  • (6/24/2009 2:19:00 AM)

    well...seems talking and speaking eyes with a lot of good impressive effects... really a good and realistic poem...well written and courageous way of expressions... love this stanza of the poem very much..
    My eyes are so nice
    I keep gazing at the mirror thrice
    so I must take care of my eyes
    to see the world rise.
    yes... eyes are every thing in the face and good you got best eyes as you said so... wonderful 10+++++++++
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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (12/3/2008 11:51:00 AM)

    Beautiful eyes. Very well written.I really like it. (Report)Reply

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  • Paul Butters (7/12/2008 4:08:00 PM)

    A most charming and clever poem. Has an endearing lightness. Must have got a good grade surely. A ten from me anyway. Paul. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/11/2008 5:58:00 AM)

    Good poem. Often we neglect our eyes. Yes we should take care of them (Report)Reply

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  • (7/10/2008 9:17:00 AM)

    Yes young lady your eyes are beautiful use them for all that is beautiful in this world close them to the ugliness 10 Chris (Report)Reply

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  • Ershad Mazumder (7/9/2008 10:39:00 PM)

    I am fond of eye. Its like ocean.Dive there to the bottom, you will not die. Dear Joan, I like it. Its really a good piece. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/9/2008 8:52:00 AM)

    Truly beautiful. It moves in such a light and friendly manner. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/8/2008 5:09:00 AM)

    This poem is what I dreamed of once and now you granted me my wish. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/7/2008 10:42:00 PM)

    A great write Joan, keep writing.
    - Raj Nandy
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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (7/7/2008 6:41:00 AM)

    True, we should take best care of our eyes, which help us to see the outside world. (Report)Reply

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  • Tango (7/7/2008 5:51:00 AM)

    The eyes are the window to the soul, so they say.
    An excellent poem.
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  • (7/6/2008 6:40:00 AM)

    Your eyes are nice and light
    like a child.Your simplicity your charm. x
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (7/6/2008 6:03:00 AM)

    ' Your eyes are the light of your heart
    that's sees happiness and sadness' - Ravi

    Your poem is very good
    Thanks for sharing
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (7/5/2008 4:49:00 AM)

    so I must take care of my eyes
    to see the world rise.

    Fine composition!
    Your eyes want to see 'world rise' is something great! ....well done
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