Lawrence S. Pertillar

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My Eyes Are Fixed Only Upon The Dealer - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

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  • Mark NwagwuMark Nwagwu (10/17/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    thanks Lawrence for this write - do we suggest that you must read all our works? i imagine you get some requests - such as i will send you after reading this - that you read this or that poem and make your comment. And we leave it at that: if you do, I'm grateful, and if you don't, i may not remember. After all, what you do with your time is entirely up to you.
    We read your write, and some of us rate them; such as this poem, which i rate a 10 mainly because it is addressed as you say, to the 'Dealer', and it is his game. I like this a lot. when we realize all we do is play with the hand dealt out to us, and the Dealer watches as we work in his vineyard. So mine is your first 10. And you may, if you wish, read any of my two poems. And, please, that's not why i read yours, that you may read mine.

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