My Final Thoughts Poem by Rudy Puentes

My Final Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


As I lay here in bed
Thinking of you
Something comes to my mind
Will I ever be with you

I lay in bed
With that thought in mind
Wondering and thinking
If I should just give you more time

My final thoughts
With you on my mind
Makes me wonder
Should I just not try

I mean I do care for you
I care for you deeply
I just wish I knew
If you even notice me

When I’m with you
I feel untouchable
When I’m with you
I feel invincible

You could have been my princess
You could have been my queen
You chose to say no
That was fine with me

Just now the light
That kept my love for you a glow
Has finally went out
And now I begin to grow cold

So I guess my question is answered
I have to let go
My light is finally put out
And with it went my soul

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Rudy Puentes

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San Fernando Valley
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