My Life! Poem by Rakesh Bhalavi

My Life!

Rating: 5.0


Dont ask me,
who I am.
I have no identity,
since the day my life began.

I am just a person,
living on this earth.
Standing still on a place,
I think, do I have some worth?

I stare at this world,
and blank is my face.
Cant understand why people
are running this rat race?

I close my eyes,
cant see what within.
why am I here for,
I am still searchin.

But one day I think,
I'll find my way.
I'll just kep searching
Come What May.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saffron Mona 28 January 2009

10 on 10! ! , , u deserves it, really nice poem with simplicity, , n truth, , keep goin man! !

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Ankit Saxena 28 January 2009

nice work man! ! ! ! ! i may not b as good at words as u r but still can make clear by ma comment dat i loved it thoroughly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! keep it up! !

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