Wednesday, March 28, 2007

My Life Comments

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All my life i lay there,
Spat on and smothered,
The darkness hovering,
Oh, please leave me be.

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COMMENTS
Csdb Kind 24 May 2008
i was there, , i found the sky..not blue but black.. it had light.. lots of light it has a good end for the seeker.. good luck
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Arielisa Castillo 21 June 2007
wonderful poem i cant related to this poem i to flew away but have not seen the blue sky yet
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