You were born, a little baby boy to my sister
And when you opened your eyes to see the world,
Wow! Enchanting and mystical poem, enticing my spirit throughout while reading it! Sadly touching, yet inspiring to see the love between you and your lil' nephew. Wonderfully articulated, well written even rhythm, really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn
A wonderful loving tribute to your little nephew. Wonderful.
An excellent write with good narration though perhaps a tad too long.
A good poem with deep thoughts.
Thanks for sharing with me
The narration is quite long. But still interesting. Deserves 10+
oh how a lovely poem like story.. was long though.. enjoyed it much... good job 10++
Nice poem. Keeping writing10.Even I have written one poem on my niece.and its atrue poem! !
absolutely amazing. i loved it! ! ! ! it's really great that u love ur nephew so much. beautiful and simple. keep it up man! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is good!
wow.... all this as a father i am going through.... i am really able to relate.... you won't believe... i many a times share with my wife that the boy is god......the smile, the exploration... the looks.... and we learn a lot from him.... the moments are captured in a nice way...fantastic aaryaan.
We had a glimpse of the little world you and Vasin created for yourself...It was more like a cobweb, intricated yet so well structured...a small world within the big world, a real world within the surreal world...and I don't know when you have written this or if Vasin has come back or not...but the golden moments you guys spent together came alive...the fact remains you are the best surrogate father I have ever met...
nice poem, well penned with deep thoughts..........
looks like u like ur little nephew as i do mine, i got a poem with same title,
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