Wednesday, December 16, 2009

My Only Grandma Comments

Rating: 3.3

Her hands ripple like pancakes
Being poured in a pan
And on them- wedding rings:
A ring from each man.

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Kyle Shield Laster
COMMENTS
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 16 December 2009

'i will miss her sweet smell..how realistic

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Janell Cressman 16 December 2009

wow, that is really sweet, i know what amazing memories you can have with a grandma, and that they are really cool, this is a really good poem, and it's short but oh so sweet! ! ! ! ! (10)

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Marieta Maglas 16 December 2009

Her chest swells for her heart's Tucked fat with sweet lovin' nice poem, nice portrait 10

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