Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,402 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

My Poem To My Lovely Beauty Lady After She Forgotten Me With All My Sadness - Poem by Ali Sabry

My lovely lady
I don’t know from where you came to me
I don’t know from where I came to you
My lovely lady why I met you in that day
Why I made you my lovely lady
Why I made myself crazy about your love
You entered in my life suddenly

- Sure I became so proud cause I met a lady like your awesome beauty.
- I met your awesome beauty that beauty nobody have it in whole the world
You became like a princess with me.
- Every beating in my heart is a drum and say your beautiful name in all the time.

My lovely lady I was about to dance on my heart beat
My lovely lady your name is plaid in my brain
Your picture is in front of my eyes in all the time
I loved you from the first time I saw you
I loved you so much from all my heart
I loved you when I know your awesome beauty
I loved you because you are my uncle’s daughter so don’t forget this please
You are my lovely beauty lady in whole my life
Honey you still my lovely lady to this day
So please don’t think that I lost my love to you
You are very expensive life on me
Honey I am afraid from losing my love to you
You are very expensive more than whole my life
You are my other half simply
So I can’t live without you or without your love specially
My lovely lady there is no expensive for the love till the life
My lovely lady your love taught me many things about the love
My lovely lady you made me crazy about your love
I became out of control when I stand in front of you only for moments
I can’t tolerance your awesome wonderful beauty
But at end you made me nobody in front of you simply with all my sadness
I paid everything for you
I paid all my life for you
I wasted all my life for nothing at end
I was ready to stand on my knees in front of you asking you to marry me
It was my dream to come to you someday carrying the diamond ring
You simply dropped me like a cigarette from the car on the ground
My lovely lady I was ready to pay anything you want from me
I just wanted you beside me only no more no less instead all this
If you really left me I will make all peoples cry if I shout for once
Oh you made all my tears cry
You drain till my tears of my eyes

- My lovely lady at end who won who loss?
- Simply I loss cause all my love was from one side only.
- This is the big problem, This is the love from one side results.
- I couldn’t have your attention for once to make you feel what I feel here deep inside.

Inside my sufferings heart there is a pain and losses
I kept you inside my white heart in whole these long years
You was my soul twin and my soul breeze
But this is my fate and I have to accept it at end

- I became a love story victim at end like “Romeo and Joliet”.
- I became a story and anniversary simply you can remove me from your brain.

Thank you so much for everything you are did it to me
Specially your leaving me lonely at end

- But I want you to be sure that I will never get marry after you in whole my life cause you destroyed all my life and you broken my white heart.
- My lovely beauty lady I wrote this poem after you are forgotten me with all my sadness because of a tiny thing is that you couldn’t know me well but we have the same blood and we are breathing the same air every day.

Sincerely The Romantic Man
Ali Ayoob Sabry

Comments about My Poem To My Lovely Beauty Lady After She Forgotten Me With All My Sadness by Ali Sabry

  • Lewis Findley (4/16/2015 7:37:00 PM)

    Very good indeed, Ali. Pen on brother. You are an obvious romantic. Enjoyed. God bless you. Lewid (Report) Reply

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  • (6/28/2012 11:50:00 PM)

    That is very good :) I suggest you should probably think up of different topics, as it is obvious you love your lovely lady, whoever that is :) (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (6/26/2012 1:55:00 AM)

    Love is not the thing of begging you know, Love wants the winning soul. So try to change your passion to win the game and establish you are fit for the lady for whom you cry. Try to make yourself inevitable for that beautiful OR ugly lady. Take the challenge and hold the reign to win the race. Thank you. Wish your best luck.....One thing, Poet is successful to make disgusted by the Liala-Moznu complex to the reader.....Thank you. Write long. (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2012 3:24:00 AM)

    Its Romeo and Juliet liked the uncle daughter sinful.Love the cigarette.Very good.Very enjoyable read. (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Egbert (6/23/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    So much truth in your explanation of love! No worries my friend you will love again, if she discarded your gift of love, she didn't deserve your tender heart. Now chin up, forgive and never forget so your heart is open and ready for your true soulmate. Oh, and this left a lump in my throat nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2012 7:08:00 AM)

    Its either a poem or a short story. if you intend poetry it needs to be a lot tighter in terms of shorter lines to say the same thing. It needs work to make it better (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2012 1:56:00 AM)

    I would suggest to write another piece from the third person point of view. Or wite a short story. Poetry needs more metaphors and other tools to sound profound. Best. W (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2012 12:14:00 AM)

    I'm curious as to why your poems are denominated by the pronoun my - smacks of self-centeredness. Which explains why this particular piece rambles about the self. You could try a little third person point of view and - it is hoped - change the character and perspective of your pieces. I'd also take Adeline's advice to heart. Good luck. (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2012 2:48:00 PM)

    If you love someone, set her free; if she comes back, she is yours, if she doesn't, she never was. (Report) Reply

  • Myat Myat Thu (6/22/2012 8:30:00 AM)

    I can see your emotional honesty through this poem. Very good creative work! (Report) Reply

  • Kiyaga Lyttle Cephas (raheem) (6/21/2012 4:19:00 PM)

    Well written and touching (Report) Reply

  • Darkangel Flyfree (6/21/2012 12:49:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful and sad poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Yewande Adedokun (6/13/2012 2:53:00 PM)

    wow, she dont knw wot she's missing, can u make her read ur poem? (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (6/9/2012 7:43:00 PM)

    I see there are many comments below who dared to be truthful and advise in the true sense of friendship. She is gone, for whatever reason. The first comment had it right, personal growth is your new project. Begin by changing the subject of your poems. There are other subjects, and read, read, read other's poems. You will find a much broader life ahead. Of course you must read mine - We The Unencumbered -
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  • (12/29/2011 9:13:00 AM)

    That's so beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    Well, this is a nice piece but too long, expressing an agony or a hurt memory caused by a loved one, maybe because you slept, dreamt and ate love that's why the lovely queen decided to break your heart, one don't suppose to ouerdo things because love is an idea.thank for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2011 3:08:00 AM)

    Surely your heart speaks. I pray her heart listen. Great work! (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2011 10:38:00 AM)

    Your love you want to give is so big.
    The lady should see by this poem that
    the love you have is true. Great poem.
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  • (12/28/2011 10:20:00 AM)

    A very lengthy, exhaustive, lovely poem for a lovely (how much?) lady..God bless her and save her soul from such romantic poet; -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011

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