My Toilet

Rating: 3.8
They look into the bowl
it is dark and quiet
one stands alone
a poo is present.
It glistens in the toilet water
the brown feels soft on my skin
'i didn't eat any corn'
I spoke to the poo within.
Friday, January 28, 2005
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COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 21 January 2017
poo is always better with corn. and melted butter adds pizazz. bri :)
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A Number 17 November 2012
Seems like a lot of people are jealous of your success. Maybe because your poem is describing their poetry? Just saying...
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Siyabonga Khanyile 08 November 2012
okey that was sick and dope at the sametime! ! !
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Jack Williams 26 August 2009
I like your attitude. Poetry can be about whatever the Hell you want it to be.
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anurag duggal 09 March 2009
well another flavour of poetry.....different fromkeats and wordsworth :)) interesting :))
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Aman Biswas 26 December 2008
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! awesome! ! dude ur the next gen poet: P xD nice work!
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Min Sia 09 November 2008
Poem hater, and yet, your poem was great! You're fearless! ! I salute you! ! !
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Alice Winters 09 October 2008
uhmm that was ok? but like really weird dude try to write something that has a message
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Timothy Mercurio 19 September 2008
not bad you should read my poems?
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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008
Nice job is done, like it.
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