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My Toilet - Poem by poem hater
They look into the bowl
it is dark and quiet
one stands alone
a poo is present.
It glistens in the toilet water
the brown feels soft on my skin
'i didn't eat any corn'
I spoke to the poo within.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 28, 2005
Poem Edited: Friday, November 21, 2008
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poo is always better with corn. and melted butter adds pizazz.
bri :) (Report)Reply
Seems like a lot of people are jealous of your success. Maybe because your poem is describing their poetry? Just saying... (Report)Reply
okey that was sick and dope at the sametime! ! ! (Report)Reply
I like your attitude. Poetry can be about whatever the Hell you want it to be. (Report)Reply
well another flavour of poetry.....different fromkeats and wordsworth :)) interesting :)) (Report)Reply
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! awesome! ! dude ur the next gen poet: P xD nice work! (Report)Reply
Poem hater, and yet, your poem was great! You're fearless! ! I salute you! ! ! (Report)Reply
uhmm that was ok?
but like really weird dude
try to write something that has a message (Report)Reply
not bad you should read my poems? (Report)Reply
Nice job is done, like it. (Report)Reply
Nice Job, this made me laugh..I like your approach to writing, very funny! ! !
best wishes
Jon (Report)Reply
exactly! ! ! straight and true - no shit. your poetry is better than you probably think. (Report)Reply
Can you write something else that is not unwise because it sounds like you're being imprudent thats what people think. I think you do care, so how about writing something to get the reader's interest. (Report)Reply
I have to say thats really nasty. Good poem, but nasty. (Report)Reply
Its like looking back on things you regretted doing, what a relief upon realizing that most results of our actions do not come out as expected! For me, its a realistic poem though. A 10. (Report)Reply
Its like looking back on things you regretted doing, what a relief upon realizing that most results of our actions do not come out as expected! (Report)Reply
Ewwwwwwwwwww that's that's disgustin....sorry though
peace (Report)Reply
Wow i am new to this site and that poem..........speach less but only you know why you wrote it. (Report)Reply
WOW.... thats all i can say. (Report)Reply
*clears throat* umm...yeah...this poem was...i dont even wana say it...just write about something that means something seriously! (Report)Reply