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My Toilet - Poem by poem hater

They look into the bowl
it is dark and quiet
one stands alone
a poo is present.
It glistens in the toilet water
the brown feels soft on my skin
'i didn't eat any corn'
I spoke to the poo within.


Comments about My Toilet by poem hater

  • Bri Edwards (1/21/2017 4:36:00 PM)

    poo is always better with corn. and melted butter adds pizazz.

    bri :)
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  • (11/17/2012 3:39:00 PM)

    Seems like a lot of people are jealous of your success. Maybe because your poem is describing their poetry? Just saying... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/8/2012 12:46:00 AM)

    okey that was sick and dope at the sametime! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/26/2009 6:51:00 PM)

    I like your attitude. Poetry can be about whatever the Hell you want it to be. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/9/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    well another flavour of poetry.....different fromkeats and wordsworth :)) interesting :)) (Report)Reply

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  • (12/26/2008 8:32:00 AM)

    BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! awesome! ! dude ur the next gen poet: P xD nice work! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/9/2008 12:10:00 AM)

    Poem hater, and yet, your poem was great! You're fearless! ! I salute you! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/9/2008 9:07:00 PM)

    uhmm that was ok?
    but like really weird dude
    try to write something that has a message
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  • (9/19/2008 12:05:00 AM)

    not bad you should read my poems? (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/18/2008 11:39:00 AM)

    Nice job is done, like it. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/4/2008 11:10:00 PM)

    Nice Job, this made me laugh..I like your approach to writing, very funny! ! !

    best wishes
    Jon
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  • (4/28/2008 7:43:00 AM)

    exactly! ! ! straight and true - no shit. your poetry is better than you probably think. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2008 12:49:00 PM)

    Can you write something else that is not unwise because it sounds like you're being imprudent thats what people think. I think you do care, so how about writing something to get the reader's interest. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2008 12:39:00 PM)

    I have to say thats really nasty. Good poem, but nasty. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/26/2008 4:57:00 AM)

    Its like looking back on things you regretted doing, what a relief upon realizing that most results of our actions do not come out as expected! For me, its a realistic poem though. A 10. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/26/2008 4:57:00 AM)

    Its like looking back on things you regretted doing, what a relief upon realizing that most results of our actions do not come out as expected! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2008 2:51:00 AM)

    Ewwwwwwwwwww that's that's disgustin....sorry though

    peace
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  • (3/18/2008 8:36:00 AM)

    Wow i am new to this site and that poem..........speach less but only you know why you wrote it. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/15/2008 6:28:00 AM)

    WOW.... thats all i can say. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/10/2007 12:34:00 AM)

    *clears throat* umm...yeah...this poem was...i dont even wana say it...just write about something that means something seriously! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 28, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, November 21, 2008


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