Myself Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Myself

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I produced the air, which I needed, from my death
Now I am the air
I created water, that I consumed, from my tears
Now l am water
I emanated the light, which I depended on,
from my eyes
Now I am the light
I cultivated the land, on which I stood, from my songs
Now I am the land
I made the sky, to which I belonged, from my vision
Now I am the sky
I assembled myself, which I acquired, from others
Now I think therefore I am....

Friday, October 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

While I read this poem, First It was like composed to song, Second, I felt as if this poem is sang by group of angels. Nice to read mam.thank you.

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Mubeen Sadhika 18 October 2016

Thank you so much for your nice comments. It encourages me a lot

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2016

A philosophical touch with the sprinkle of reality is what I felt about your poem.....Nicely conceived and written...10+++

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Mubeen Sadhika 14 October 2016

Thank you so much Mohammed Asim Nehal

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 October 2016

I assembled myself, which I acquired, from others Now I think therefore I am.... A highly creative work.

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Mubeen Sadhika 14 October 2016

Thank you so much Subhas Chandra Chakra

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