Thursday, May 18, 2006

*nameless* Comments

Rating: 3.2

As the birds sing they open the mind..
They find me asleep in my dreamful world.
(Whats there you may ask)
Its all there, filled with the possible and inprobable,

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Rain Storm
COMMENTS
BEAU GOLDEN 22 June 2006

well done. u gripped me from line one and held my interest on every line. why doesn't this piece of art deserve a name?

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Anjana Aravind 24 May 2006

Nice poem.... Keep writing... And I am intrigued by your name ' Rain Storm' Anjana

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