Unwritten Soul


Nature Of Life Journey - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Walking in the air, stepping in the wind
should we believe we are flying?
Shattered glass or it will be broken
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Comments about Nature Of Life Journey by Unwritten Soul

  • (2/27/2019 10:18:00 AM)

    The experience of nature in our dreams...a magnificent observation. If we feel rage inside, do we experience the fire? If we deride an old friend, do we feel the chill, the ice? You remind that nature exists inside as well as outside. A great poem, Soul. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (2/23/2018 6:02:00 AM)

    Life has been nicely and touchingly compared with the elements of nature. Marvelous poem shared, thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • Rebecca Navarre (12/5/2017 11:17:00 PM)

    Thank You Ever So Much For
    Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless Endless! ! ! ! !
    10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
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  • Rebecca Navarre (12/5/2017 11:08:00 PM)

    Oh Soul! ! ! ! ! This Is Ever Ever So
    Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Such Spirit Within! ! ! ! !
    That So Strong And Beautifully Sings! ! ! ! !
    Ever So Heart Up Lifting! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
    Like A Light You Glow! ! ! ! !
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2017 10:23:00 PM)

    It is a marvellous poem on life journey having fantastic depiction and stunning expression. The beginning lines are more attractive. Let me quite.. ..
    Walking in the air, stepping in the wind
    should we believe we are flying?
    Shattered glass or it will be broken
    Do we feel the same thing inside?
    If we draw a pictures with different color hues
    Will we understand the abstract we have done?
    I feel it is a high philosophical poem shared nicely. Thanks.
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  • Muzahidul Reza (4/23/2017 7:39:00 AM)

    Walking in the air, stepping in the wind
    should we believe we are flying? wonderfully written, our life journey is mainly one way but different people see it differently, thank you for sharing
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/3/2016 5:37:00 AM)

    Abstract! ! ! With positive imagination. Nice work. (Report)Reply

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  • Barnabas Michael (3/10/2014 6:29:00 PM)

    Wow...! Sound like an angel speech in written, telling life it bodies are worth constrain to all above, thousand truth, your great in this put to write work success, am also amaze of ur imagery less and apparent as imagined and wonders. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2012 11:19:00 AM)

    Yippee! Soul you have not only soul but also heart in right place, Yes I too go far in dreams and fly feel like living in the other words may be world of stars with any wars for food and life. I am vexed with bloody bout always waging war to to get paltry grains...........

    Hurrah! Sometimes we can fly as the dryad of trees said by John Keats but when we come back to life sometimes as said by we will shattered like battered old door! Anyways for writing this poem to the poet, I give a Lovely Marigold flowers bloomed in India! ha ha ha :) :) :) (I fear this smile is plastic!) Sorry but not your poem! .......
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  • (3/6/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    Unwritten soul...touching my soul and my spirit...Also always a lot of reasons to make us to stay calm
    It's all just in life abstract drawing we need to see clear thing
    Like when anger in soul keep burning all the trust of anything
    Fueling by the pain and consuming all innocent dreams
    Will be someday we regret as nothing left, but just the ashes
    Ashes of something from something beautiful we dream
    Could be the ashes just a special life made for one day your words...holding on to life my life of love from within my own world...not the world outtside...I appreciate your mind for my peace of mind...
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  • Raj Arumugam (2/14/2012 2:31:00 PM)

    a good poem of hope and inner strength, US (Report)Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (2/8/2012 12:23:00 PM)

    Lot of reasons to fall but i must grow toward light
    And my root deeper to earth gravity of life reality
    One day i will be stronger to face harsh wind
    Walking in the air, stepping in the wind
    Flying? yes we can, I believe we can
    we can flying when spirit is our wings
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    This's my favourite lines.......
    But we cannot walk or fly through a world with no light, but still we're searching for light and wants to be under its shadow and those light will be the truth, that will lead us to the heights of life.....
    It's a wonderful poem: : : : : : :
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  • Ramesh Rai (2/1/2012 5:25:00 AM)

    i agree with Hans VR. a nice poem (Report)Reply

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  • Hans Vr (1/26/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    Fully agree. What a wonderful closing line, we can fly when spirit is our wings. Very meaningful poem (Report)Reply

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  • Jinal Oswal (1/24/2012 9:42:00 AM)

    A beautiful piece of light, life, a fresh breeze, a sweet scent... Yes we can... I loved the spirit.. the beautiful cycle of life, of nature.. again Soul, you shine... and we shine because you share your light with us... I loved this poem :) Thanks for being the beautiful Soul... (Report)Reply

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  • Wahab Abdul (1/24/2012 9:41:00 AM)

    this is a very nice poem..i like the poem because of its quality of flow of thought and flow of content...good play of logic too...it is a celebral poem...keep writing like this poem..top marks 10++++and please read my new poems (Report)Reply

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  • Odejayi Sodiq Adewale (1/19/2012 11:43:00 AM)

    all about life....great poem (Report)Reply

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  • (1/19/2012 7:25:00 AM)

    I love this poem. in anything, inspiration and belief remains vital. (Report)Reply

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  • Jacqui Broad (1/18/2012 1:58:00 PM)

    This poem is like a fresh breeze of wind, and I love the wind! A *&% beautiful poem, it brought tears to my eyes... These days just what I needed to read. Thanks for sharing your Beautiful Soul. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/17/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    yes we can, i believe we can
    we can fly when spirit is our wings.


    indeed a fantastic poem my friend! !
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