Monday, January 9, 2012

Nature Of Life Journey Comments

Rating: 4.4
Walking in the air, stepping in the wind
should we believe we are flying?
Shattered glass or it will be broken
Do we feel the same thing inside?

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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Mj Lemon 27 February 2019
The experience of nature in our dreams...a magnificent observation. If we feel rage inside, do we experience the fire? If we deride an old friend, do we feel the chill, the ice? You remind that nature exists inside as well as outside. A great poem, Soul.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2018
Life has been nicely and touchingly compared with the elements of nature. Marvelous poem shared, thanks.
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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2017
Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless Endless! ! ! ! ! 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2017
Oh Soul! ! ! ! ! This Is Ever Ever So Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Such Spirit Within! ! ! ! ! That So Strong And Beautifully Sings! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heart Up Lifting! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Like A Light You Glow! ! ! ! !
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2017
It is a marvellous poem on life journey having fantastic depiction and stunning expression. The beginning lines are more attractive. Let me quite.. .. Walking in the air, stepping in the wind should we believe we are flying? Shattered glass or it will be broken Do we feel the same thing inside? If we draw a pictures with different color hues Will we understand the abstract we have done? I feel it is a high philosophical poem shared nicely. Thanks.
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 June 2016
Abstract! ! ! With positive imagination. Nice work.
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Barnabas Michael 10 March 2014
Wow...! Sound like an angel speech in written, telling life it bodies are worth constrain to all above, thousand truth, your great in this put to write work success, am also amaze of ur imagery less and apparent as imagined and wonders.
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Whisperkwane Lamb 06 March 2012
Unwritten soul...touching my soul and my spirit...Also always a lot of reasons to make us to stay calm It's all just in life abstract drawing we need to see clear thing Like when anger in soul keep burning all the trust of anything Fueling by the pain and consuming all innocent dreams Will be someday we regret as nothing left, but just the ashes Ashes of something from something beautiful we dream Could be the ashes just a special life made for one day your words...holding on to life my life of love from within my own world...not the world outtside...I appreciate your mind for my peace of mind...
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Raj Arumugam 14 February 2012
a good poem of hope and inner strength, US
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Vipins Puthooran 08 February 2012
Lot of reasons to fall but i must grow toward light And my root deeper to earth gravity of life reality One day i will be stronger to face harsh wind Walking in the air, stepping in the wind Flying? yes we can, I believe we can we can flying when spirit is our wings ******** This's my favourite lines....... But we cannot walk or fly through a world with no light, but still we're searching for light and wants to be under its shadow and those light will be the truth, that will lead us to the heights of life..... It's a wonderful poem: : : : : : :
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Ramesh Rai 01 February 2012
i agree with Hans VR. a nice poem
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Hans Vr 26 January 2012
Fully agree. What a wonderful closing line, we can fly when spirit is our wings. Very meaningful poem
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Jinal Oswal 24 January 2012
A beautiful piece of light, life, a fresh breeze, a sweet scent... Yes we can... I loved the spirit.. the beautiful cycle of life, of nature.. again Soul, you shine... and we shine because you share your light with us... I loved this poem :) Thanks for being the beautiful Soul...
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Wahab Abdul 24 January 2012
this is a very nice poem..i like the poem because of its quality of flow of thought and flow of content...good play of logic too...it is a celebral poem...keep writing like this poem..top marks 10++++and please read my new poems
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Odejayi Sodiq Adewale 19 January 2012
all about life....great poem
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C. Wega 19 January 2012
I love this poem. in anything, inspiration and belief remains vital.
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Jacqui Broad 18 January 2012
This poem is like a fresh breeze of wind, and I love the wind! A *&% beautiful poem, it brought tears to my eyes... These days just what I needed to read. Thanks for sharing your Beautiful Soul.
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 17 January 2012
yes we can, i believe we can we can fly when spirit is our wings. indeed a fantastic poem my friend! !
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Dave Walker 13 January 2012
Like this my lil soul. To fly in dreams means We can go any where we want, we can go High into the sky feel the freedom and clear our minds. A fantastic poem my lil soul.
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Eric Cockrell 13 January 2012
the dust of all our failures becomes the path to our understanding... another very good poem!
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