Friday, January 2, 2009

Nature's Down Fall Comments

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Deep in the mountains a stream overflows
Over flowing from the melting of the snows
The snows from its mountain top peek
The peek now lays so bare, so sleek

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Michael Carlson
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Reyna Julia 26 January 2009

Are you trying to say that when the humans arrived they changed what was once beautiful into something that is just plain ugly.

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