Navi Comments

neatly penned... do read my contest poem and vote for it.. quite similar to yours

i can only wonder whom you are writing about.....or about whom you are writing [my english teacher would have told me to NOT put about at the end of the sentence! ]. this is nice. i envy the her....i think. thanks for sharing. ;) what is the origin of the title? ?

Good write. Your feelings show you have true love at heart and will always cherish it - even when older. Keep writing.

Mother Earth deserves it and you say it so well.

u seem to be a great lover, nd the one u r gonna be with wud be lucky.

it feels powerfully passionate and georgeously sexy.

This is very sweet! I like the flow of it, and, again your use of the language is great.

Fantastic poem! :) A guy like that is perfect for a girl; respect, loving, caring, and a gentlemen. I'm sure you'll get her. :)

I like this poem as it seems to play on words - at one point it can be the desire to value the one you love, on the other hand it seems to personify Mother Earth - and the desire to value her in nature.

well personified..........

Love in words, love in action. This would come from the heart that really wants to give: for love is about giving. Great poem.

Well, all in all, it's a good poem. There's feelings in it. Though I do have a question about the title. Why is it called 'navl'?

wow this is such alovely poem i just simply love it :) , love, Tin Mouse