Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Navi Comments

Rating: 5.0
Though I'm not her father
I'll always take care of her
with intercession and prayer
And though ‘am not a good singer


JR Cuyam
Kalpana Shah 24 September 2013
neatly penned... do read my contest poem and vote for it.. quite similar to yours
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Bri Edwards 23 September 2013
i can only wonder whom you are writing about.....or about whom you are writing [my english teacher would have told me to NOT put about at the end of the sentence! ]. this is nice. i envy the her....i think. thanks for sharing. ;) what is the origin of the title? ?
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Roseann Shawiak 23 September 2013
Good write. Your feelings show you have true love at heart and will always cherish it - even when older. Keep writing.
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Sheena Datta 27 May 2012
Mother Earth deserves it and you say it so well.
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Aditya Gupta 26 May 2012
u seem to be a great lover, nd the one u r gonna be with wud be lucky.
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Wabi Sabi 25 May 2012
it feels powerfully passionate and georgeously sexy.
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Kimberly Mitchell 25 May 2012
This is very sweet! I like the flow of it, and, again your use of the language is great.
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Alicia Meyers 24 May 2012
Fantastic poem! :) A guy like that is perfect for a girl; respect, loving, caring, and a gentlemen. I'm sure you'll get her. :)
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Marilyn George 24 May 2012
I like this poem as it seems to play on words - at one point it can be the desire to value the one you love, on the other hand it seems to personify Mother Earth - and the desire to value her in nature.
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well personified..........
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Feyisayo Anjorin 24 May 2012
Love in words, love in action. This would come from the heart that really wants to give: for love is about giving. Great poem.
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F. Hanani 02 May 2012
Well, all in all, it's a good poem. There's feelings in it. Though I do have a question about the title. Why is it called 'navl'?
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Neko Girl 24 April 2012
wow this is such alovely poem i just simply love it :) , love, Tin Mouse
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