Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Never Again To The Light Comments

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I saw a single dot of light Which had a light that had no like
It shined a night of a twilight But though today it has no light
For that alone i sank in dark and reached the ground of a no above
All is one and one is all....


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Meaow Meaow 11 May 2012
I appreciate your opinion and thank you for it but im just a beginner and this is my first poem.BTW English is not my native languish and i'm still learning it. : D :) (:
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Saadat Tahir 10 May 2012
weird, contradictory and hardly intelligible i wish the poet had used the hints to better advantage in the poem itself... be happy :)
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