Thursday, October 13, 2011

Never Say I Love U

Rating: 5.0
never say i love you
if you don't really care
never talk about feelings
if they aren't really there
never say you are going to
if you are not going to start
never hold my hand
if you have to go far
never look into my eyes
if all you tell is lies
never say hey'
if you really mean good bye'
never say forever
if you think to leave me ever..
forever makes me cry
as i fail everytime i try
to make you happy...
shania bhayana
Guy Lip-more 12 August 2012
Very good write..........well done.
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Brynja . 04 February 2012
Hi. Wondering why if you look up Google there are a hundred other people saying this poem is theirs, and half of them had it online a long time before you did....I'd just really like to know who wrote it as it's beautiful :) I have my own poetry site, and was hoping to contact the author to ask if I could put it up, giving credit where credit is due, but I don't know who to ask now: (
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Jinal Oswal 21 November 2011
If you are trying to make some one happy, then its just you who cares.. and when we are doing something for that some one, the list goes on and on... the person sound very demanding... You write wonderful :)
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Romeo Della Valle 16 October 2011
Wow! What an amazing and powerful write that shows your talent and great feelings! Outburst of the heart that clearly shows also your potential and cleverness! Love, love and more love we all write about it but a lot of us forget (except you) that love is a two-way street! 10+++ God Bless You! Keep inspiring the World with more of such powerful writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
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Jacqui Broad 16 October 2011
The list for things not to do, can obviously be longer, because the harder one try to make someone happy, the more unsuccessful we appear. Beautiful piece... :)
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No Ones Bidness 14 October 2011
Nice poem, it's like a list of things that someone should know before they say they say those words
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Shania Bhayana 13 October 2011
thnx.. :) for aprriciating my write..
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Nadia Pamphil 13 October 2011
i think u jusss read my mind
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Shania Bhayana 13 October 2011
thnx...a lot.. m glad tha you appriciated my work..
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Vipins Puthooran 13 October 2011
Love is come from an opened feelings of heart and where we cannot lie but die for's a nice poem and good write...i like this one very much..
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