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Tuesday, March 18, 2014

New Beginning Comments

Rating: 4.3
Autumn leaves come tumbling down
Same as my tears
Falling to the ground
Released unfettered


Colleen Courtney
Abhipsa Tripathy 05 May 2015
A great poem with two drops of tear.I wish in every one's life the tears will dry and a new beginning will step forward.thanks.......................
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Tyrone Gayle 18 September 2014
As I start a new semester in college and new stage of my life this poem was captivating from the start. Your used of words as a paint brush creates amazing art pieces.
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Cheryl Griffith 05 August 2014
Beautiful poem, so full of imagery, a well painted picture I could actually see it happening. That's what poetry is about, the emotions, the senses (see, touch, taste, smell) you brought it all out. I love it
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Chris Zachariou 15 July 2014
Every time I read one of your poems I am touched by the sensitivity and loveliness of your words. I love the sadness but also the note of hope with which you end your poem.
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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2014
Life and seasons are victims of a cycle, tears after smile and smile after tears and sometimes tears joy in excitement, all are parts of life. A nice write.
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Simplicity at its best.......downpour of emotions captured in spring and autumn at its very best..........a great piece
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Sohan Prasad Sharma 24 June 2014
lovely, sweetly weaved, knitted and sublime!
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Abdulla Al-hemaidy 23 June 2014
So nice reading! I liked this short poem :)
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Amitava Sur 21 June 2014
A lovely poem Coleen fostering good times in the days to come.... loved it
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Robert Melliard 12 June 2014
I have read three more of your poems and I like them all. Dream Within a Dream is great fun. In New Beginning the words released, unfettered and unbound are perhaps a little too similar in meaning to be placed so close together, but the comparison between tears and falling leaves is original. Love without Sex is my favourite however, because it is expressed in a beautifully natural, conversational, relaxed way. I would be grateful if you could comment on one or two of my recent poems as I have had no feedback about them yet.
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Valsa George 09 June 2014
Simple but lovely..... A poem of hope and positive anticipation..... Enjoyed!
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Jack Abdallah 29 May 2014
Those first three lines...beautiful! Great poem I love it!
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And as they fall, and die, they will become the strength of the future, the fuel of sustenance, meaning; or just mulch. If you cry leaves, you are a legacy that must suffer to be fulfilled. (I tried rating, but can't keep my mouth shut, so to speak) . Not to argue other comments, but, I don't believe in metaphors as a disclaimer to my ramblings & rants.
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Darren Woods 23 May 2014
great writing - I enjoyed every line. We all dream at times for new beginnings. Loved the metaphors.
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Daniel Brick 21 May 2014
This poem is written like a piece of music with two melodies - one is autumn leaves, the other is the speaker's tears - and the music they make is bittersweet. And necessary. Because autumn is large enough to contain all the sorrows of all the people, and the tears are abundant enough to fill the whole season. But then - a third theme, just a few notes, that mark the renewal of SPRING - and the dying things and the sad tears vanish... Wonderful Poem!
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Kirti Sharma 15 May 2014
Wonderful poem...! First three lines of the 1st stanza are beautiful....
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Mazhari David 14 May 2014
The tears/leaves metaphor leading to resurgence hit me. Thanks.* *
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 13 May 2014
Hello poet Colleen and this is another great romance poem with a nice surprise ending. I enjoyed, Loyd
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Anand Brown 13 May 2014
Magnificent use of your creative genius. I love how you use narrative skills to draw the readers in. Lovely poem.
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Shobana Gomes 11 May 2014
I love autumn but spring has much hope - two diverse seasons. Brilliant poem and the imagery is outstanding Colleen. Thank you too for your ever supportive comments on my poems and have a great week ahead.
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