New Independent Call Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

New Independent Call

Rating: 5.0


When nation awakes to freedom
The joy can be forgotten seldom
Millions of people rejoice in free air
The meaning of freedom is very dear

They have to breathe in own environment
Feel brotherhood and make some improvement
Now no more bitterness or feeling of hatred
New nation is to be built up and led

There are many races that all have aspirations
Bring about changes and build solid relation
Keep sway over politics and influence the policies
The powerful nation takes place within new boundaries

For new nation it is not that easy
The transformation keeps them busy
The nation is raw and unknown to international relation
The stability within and strong force outside must go with strong indication

Long live new nation and its people
They have earned freedom out from great struggle
They might have lived under somebody’s control
Today they can rejoice with new and independent call

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2014

When nation awakes to freedom The joy can be forgotten seldom

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Gajanan Mishra 21 March 2014

freedom after great struggle, great sir, thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2014

nice ex poet25 minutes ago but going out to the squares and the streets is not a freedom

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2014

Good Alex Killknow25 minutes ago Its nicely written but i feel like it doesnt flow very well Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 March 2014

Poem grade.9.167% doasl 21 Mar by Cyan Beauty to New independent call

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2014

welcome agam vora a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2014

Excellent call to freedom - Beware of false governments Steven Gress24 minutes ago Let the people govern base on mutual acceptance of all minorities. Nice write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2014

very good Seema Salman25 minutes ago fine Comment +1 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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