Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, September 8, 2009

No Advice, Please Comments

Rating: 4.9
Do we need any type of advice from others?
Why other’s plight concern us and bother?
Are those concern only meant to be lip services?
Not to learn any for self from other’s misses

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
COMMENTS
Pami Panchal 21 October 2009
Do we need any type advice from others? Why other’s plight concern us and bother? Are those only meant for lip services? Not to learn for self from other’s misses
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Shalini Sundararamalingam 20 September 2009
very true poem, some times advices are real irritating, when delivered at the wrong time and place... i enjoyed reading this poem..
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 20 September 2009
‘If I look the flip side And abide: Healthy advice Is not a vice Nor a spice But a love and guide in disguise.’ Ms. Nivedita Nice write up. Ten +++ Sir Thanks for uncle-ly comments on my poem which I cherish. I’ve total 6 short poems you’ve read one. If you favor me by reading and commenting [rating too hooo! ! ] Regards, Ms. Nivedita. UK
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thought the meter is not really constant or traceable.. it is good. the rhymes are good. so it read ok.. and the underlying message stands strong.
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Yacov Mitchenko 11 September 2009
You know, sir, I generally enjoy your verse for its thoughtfulness. What I notice, however, is that your writing tends to be too abstract and general, not sufficiently grounded in concrete situations, although what you speak of has truth and merit. Moreover, grammar and syntax can use some improvement. Your poems, also, can be shortened. Am I to understand that these are translations of your original poems? If so, I'm almost sure they are very, very good. So, let's move on to the main theme of the poem. If I understand you correctly, advice, besides its valuable content, must also be about proper timing. As a would-be advisor, I have to take into account the mind set of the person whom I may wish to advise. If I find he doesn't seem receptive, if he's arrogant, then wisdom dictates that I remain silent. If he's my friend, and of noble character, then I will advise him, even though what I say may sound harsh and insensitive. He will understand that good advice will only help him improve. And he'll thank me for it. And sir, because I respect your work and because I feel you're a serious man, I hope you will take my advice: ground your poems a little more, and work on grammar and syntax. I thank you for another thoughtful piece.
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Ashley Paul 11 September 2009
It may be liked at given point of time and heeded Some more concrete action is often needed
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Chetna Purohit 11 September 2009
It has become merely a tradition Purely academicals interest without any condition
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Umesh Lalvani 11 September 2009
Catching the nerve point where it hurts most Simple dose of solace which means nothing in cost....10
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Kashi Paul 11 September 2009
It may be liked at given point of time and heeded Some more concrete action is often needed
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Poonam Suthar 11 September 2009
It has become merely a tradition Purely academicals interest without any condition Sometimes fuel passion and serve as ignition Thought blasts within without any ammunition
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Reshma Punjabi 11 September 2009
It has become merely a tradition Purely academicals interest without any c
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Saroj Davde 11 September 2009
Sometimes fuel passion and serve as ignition Thought blasts within without any ammunition
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Radha Seth 11 September 2009
It may invite ire when hollow promises are given Increase in plights and condition horribly driven
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Ketan Rajgor 11 September 2009
It may invite ire when hollow promises are given Increase in plights and condition horribly driven......10
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Ratna Patel 11 September 2009
It has become merely a tradition Purely academicals interest without any condition Sometimes fuel passion and serve as ignition
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Kamli Kamal 11 September 2009
It is not necessary for all the time to render it free People may avoid you and some times flee......10
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Sachin Goswami 10 September 2009
Purely academicals interest without any condition Sometimes fuel passion and serve as ignition...10
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Kunwar Patel 10 September 2009
Sometimes fuel passion and serve as ignition Thought blasts within without any ammunition
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Shilpa Maheswari 10 September 2009
You may, some times, not react badly Displeasure lines may run and show it sadly If you can draw and read the lines in judgment
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Santoksingh Jadeja 10 September 2009
may be liked at given point of time and heeded Some more concrete action is often needed......10
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