Tuesday, October 9, 2012

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The dark is a coming will I make it another day?
Sleep won't come and the days on replay
My heart is so brittle, threatening to break all-apart
No adhesive made to mend this little heart


Rhonda Baker
Saadat Tahir 23 June 2014

The dark is coming with no place to hide......! this recurring theme in the poem is powerful and catchy.. it sets the tone for the overall effect nice touching poem conveys the feelings well liked

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Valerie Dohren 16 October 2012

Well written and well rhymed - very expressive.

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Dennis Fenton 09 October 2012

This poem is well written. I do hope the Author sees the other side because there is more joy on the side with the light!

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