Thursday, May 2, 2019

No Silver Lining. Comments

Rating: 5.0
It's crawling in you.
When the pain starts the cloud drops;
No silver lining.
The storm, this disease in you,

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Carl Roussell
COMMENTS
Jennifer Birchall 03 May 2019
You have captured the feeling so well dear Carl. Even if its removed it still has a hold over you.
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Carl Roussell 05 May 2019
Your words ring true - one is always aware of the chance of a recurance.
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 May 2019
Earth is beautiful But, we wrongly plant disease Ugliness cancer! If we want peace, pleasure life Need first cure for our disease!
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Carl Roussell 05 May 2019
I like your poetic reply - and thank you.
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A well crafted tanka, sir Carl....10++++++++++
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Carl Roussell 05 May 2019
thanks, I am happy you like the poem!
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Kevin Patrick 02 May 2019
Its one of the most dreaded things to happen to a person, its death with a different name, just the word conjures fear and horror. Although its just a tanka, , you have managed to capture that bleak and relentless terror that exists in everyone's mind, in just a few short words. In fact this poem scares the crap out of me. I hope this is based on artistic experience, but if it is not you have my best wishes for you. A fantastic poem, Im glad that I have read it.
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Carl Roussell 05 May 2019
Thanks for the comment, and it is not me but a couple of people close to me that have different forms of the disease that they are fighting. Thanks again for the read
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