Not At Peace Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Not At Peace

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It will be unwise not to make choice
If so, then you will have no voice
Things may go from good to bad
Events may turn in disfavor to make you sad

Choice can’t be wrong
As they are not meant to be cheap song
They are to be made out of compulsion
Merely to stand fast against the confusion

You have choice when things are lying in abundance
You have all means to enjoy it at once
You are blessed with all fortune
Things move in favor with fine tune

The choice disappears as soon as time runs out
All worries and troubles may surface to worry about
You will be pushed in the corner to think seriously
The attack will be from all sides continuously

Choice is for the rich and not poor
They will be shunted from door to door
No one may land sympathetic ear
You may suffer endlessly for years

The sufferer may have no choice
As he has to surrender and fulfill the promises
That he will abide by all conditions
Suppress all views and no more ignitions

Only brave people can make choice
Rest all may die daily with threat of demise
They can do nothing amidst constant threat
The choice may be hardly considered great

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2011

Gloria Rodikis Your comment is interesting and biblical to me where man beseeched God for some respite from life's travails.5 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2011

Send message | Maria Shipka I'm moved with your poem my friend so as am moved with event which runs in the world.... and so as you also mostly following the life all around in the nature can give me some peace and rest, can liberate me for a while from the gloomy mood and worries about the future of all mankind and this litle blue Earth....So much evil is here all arround, I doubt that the peace will once prevail...21 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2011

Send message | Gloria Rodikis I liked your words ' life is precious and not be wasted! ' 10 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2011

t will be unwise not to make choice If so, then you will have no voice Things may go from good to bad

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2011

Mutiu Olawuyi I love the consistency in your style of poetic writing. And your poem is always mind-moving. Keep Rolling in the Poetic world! 5 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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