Tanzila Rehmat


Not Virgin Anymore - Poem by Tanzila Rehmat

Knocking, something is trouncing and cracking
In her deepest self, the fear is whacking!
Cutting and slapping her self-reliance
Cursing his brutality his downright defiance!

Talking, someone is speaking and screaming
Deep down in her soul, she feels herself steaming!
Cuffing and chaining her will-power
Bearing his intensity; the hardest hour!

Moaning, something is sighing and bashing
In her body, the meek spirit with cruel is clashing!
Letting and leaving herself go mental and mad
Tolerating, promising not to get emotional and sad!

Silencing, someone is quietening and shushing
Inside her, heartlessness is continuously pushing!
Cramping and holding back, she is getting insensitive
Patting, consoling.. with her own heart getting competitive!

Fading, something is disappearing and dying
Inside out, squeaking on the surface she's lying!
Hammering and beating with her heels the floor
Failing, passing away, not virgin anymore!

Topic(s) of this poem: brutality, girl, life, rape

Form: Quatrain


Comments about Not Virgin Anymore by Tanzila Rehmat

  • Drtony Brahmin (5/21/2018 2:16:00 PM)

    Fading, something is disappearing and dying
    Inside out, squeaking on the surface she's lying! a great work..... its terrible sense, emotions, cruelty, satanic actions. no moral or ethical reflections......Godless....... a very fine poem my dear poetess. thank you. tony
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    (5/21/2018 9:32:00 PM)

    And thank you to you too for taking time to read and appreciate :) Thanks ever such a lot!

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  • Lungelo S Mbuyazi (5/18/2018 6:56:00 AM)

    Brilliant artwork..... Full of emotions and it's very emotional....10++++

    I'm placing it on my poem list...am thankfully I came across this expensive poem
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    (5/20/2018 10:01:00 PM)

    Thank you so much for your beautiful heartfelt words!

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  • Akhtar Jawad (4/23/2018 8:37:00 AM)

    A great poem on rape, the worst brutality is that when one snatches something that one cannot return to the the affected person. Taking life of someone or raping a virgin are such sins that god will never forgive. A very impressive poem! (Report)Reply

    (4/23/2018 9:23:00 AM)

    Oh thank you so much for such a heartfelt appreciation. I really feel like crying. Thanks a lot! You've a good heart and soul!

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  • Bri Edwards (3/26/2018 1:32:00 AM)

    oh, rape is a topic? let me read it again; i may understand it better; i should! nice rhyming and a fast-paced, captivating 'write'.
    ok. i also liked your alliterations and especially these lines:
    Hammering and beating with her heels the floor
    Failing, passing away, not virgin anymore! ..............to MyPoemList. bri ;)
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    (3/26/2018 4:04:00 AM)

    Oh thank you for your words and appreciation :)

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (11/30/2017 3:29:00 AM)

    Very impressive, dear Tanzila. I could not find proper words for appreciation. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

    (11/30/2017 3:48:00 AM)

    Thank you so much for your kind words! It means a lot :)

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 30, 2017



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