Numb Poem by Javier Falcon

Numb



I no longer want to be like you,
So hopeless, not being able to find the light,
with out being able to reach your prospects,
Not being able to fill your foot steps.

I become so numb, that I can't even move,
I am so depleted, yet so lively in mind,
and even so you think all I do is wrong,
'all I want to be is more like me and less like you.'

I will ravage my way through life,
learning from my mistakes and wrongs,
learning what to do without you,
as I grow as a person, as an individual.

Meanwhile you tried to correct me,
all I did was be myself, and you lost control,
even so you were not so different from me,
as once you were much like me.

Having someone who wanted to change you,
as you tried to avoid it and go wild,
trying to be free and do what you like.
So look at your past and let me free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

wow, some of those lines remind me of a song, and its a very powerful meaningful song, so this is a very good poem. 'i will ravage my way through life' woahh... very very very strong..

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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