Monday, September 24, 2012

Obituary By A K Ramanujan Comments

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Father, when he passed on,
left dust
on a table of papers,
left debts and daughters,

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Ramesh Iyengar
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Dhanappa 01 March 2021
Carrying the load of life due to careless people is beautifully presented
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Soumita Sarkar 02 June 2018
The poem is so touching.....while reminding his father...he sarcastically comments the obligations that he has to fulfil......so great lines.
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B. R. Kumawat 19 December 2017
What a poem this is! It has nothing of a poem. It bears no poetic zeal. It's much shocking and disgusting that today we have killed our poetic zeal and sensibility. We appreciate even a bundle of words. This type of so-called poems are not worth following. We should come out of these dead bundle of words. Shame to the universities that prescribe this type of so-called poems in their syllabus. Shame to the publishers that publish this type of triflities.
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aditya 05 December 2018
Why don't you try and write a poem with poetic zeal, you would surely be appreciated more than Ramanujan.
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Dhanappa Metri 01 March 2021
Sir,
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Soumita Sarkar 01 January 2017
liked the way poet has added to the end of a line but unending suffering...
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Ramesh T A 11 October 2016
It is generally a matter of fact thing to carry out and think about next step after the demise of a great person!
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