Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,538 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Ode To A Lost Love - Poem by Valerie Dohren

'Oh sweet breath of eternal life
Dance ever `pon her silent breast
Released from pain and worldly strife
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Comments about Ode To A Lost Love by Valerie Dohren

  • (1/17/2017 6:25:00 PM)


    you speak the truth for us all, and I thank you for that. (Report) Reply

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  • B.m. Biswas (11/7/2016 8:19:00 AM)

    TRAGEDY
    poem is it not but a saga
    of the life of for life's sake.
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  • Robert Murray Smith (11/5/2016 8:57:00 PM)

    Ode To A Lost Love
    A wonderful poem.++++10

    RObert
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  • Valerie Dohren (5/17/2016 12:45:00 PM)


    An old write, but pleased you liked this Tom, many thanks for reading. (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2016 3:41:00 AM)


    WoW! Val.. this is an astonishing piece of work. it goes on my favourite poems' list right away.
    Once again your handling of rhythm is superb. Others could learn a lot from reading your verse.
    I know I could. The subject matter is very good too.
    Tom Billsborough
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  • (6/2/2015 10:03:00 AM)


    Very touching... Soon death will b no more, and we may see our loved ones again. It doesn't cost a thing to read this poem over and over again. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (4/26/2015 12:04:00 AM)


    full of emotions.....
    sad but beautifully expressed...death is inevitable but most a times it takes awy those we least expect...hmmmm...never too late to share in your loss...
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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/24/2015 1:52:00 AM)


    Congratulation Valerie nice poem as an ode thank you (Report) Reply

  • Elisha Wall (1/19/2015 12:32:00 PM)


    What a tragedy that cuts short a young life! A beautiful piece nonetheless. Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2015 7:18:00 AM)


    At long last, my kindred spirit found.....
    for such words as these, poetry dance!
    With mine heart whisked away,
    as my tongue quakes to say:
    such saddened feel, this lost romance!

    Intensely beautiful. So glad to have found you Valerie. For so long I have felt alone in the world of classical poetry. I must agree with Achill below - this is certainly a masterpiece.....
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  • Patricia Grantham (12/18/2014 7:51:00 AM)


    A very touching and tender poem. Death can take its toll
    on loved ones left behind. Yet there are still memories
    to cherish. Loved this.
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  • Patricia Grantham (12/18/2014 7:50:00 AM)


    A very touching and tender poem. Death can take its toll
    on loved ones left behind. Yet there are still memories
    to cherish. Loved this.
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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)


    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)


    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/10/2014 7:55:00 AM)


    'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
    Nor yet her face so sweet and fair
    Her gentle kisses to beguile
    I`ll cherish every thought of her'
    A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • (9/28/2014 5:45:00 AM)


    This is a masterpiece. I had a tear in my eye reading this Valerie. My sister died when she was nineteen, we were very close. This poem brought the memories I have of her back, so vividly. Wish I could write this well. (Report) Reply

  • Abekah Emmanuel (8/24/2014 12:58:00 AM)


    Indeed all too soon we loose our loved ones. how sad life is sometimes! How soon our lives fade away like smoke ascends and vanishes into the heavens.....very sad but beautiful poem...once again.....well done! (Report) Reply

  • (8/19/2014 9:09:00 AM)


    beautifully sad to say good bye to someone so young..lovely rhyme.. keep up the good work.. (Report) Reply

  • Negar Zakavati (8/5/2014 3:17:00 PM)


    it is so impressive. bravo Valerie Dohren. i am proud of you. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/16/2014 6:38:00 AM)


    A very stirring and moving write Valerie. I always love reading your works.
    They really touch the heart and soul. Trying to keep from crying!
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