Wednesday, November 10, 2004

......Of Gold? Comments

Rating: 2.7
I was not looking when you found me
you stopped just long enough to smile.
I felt your presence all around me
and hoped that you would stay awhile.

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Herbert Nehrlich
COMMENTS
Ruby Honeytip 29 October 2012
Sigh! How sweet and innocent and laced with love. Beautiful writing.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 March 2009
Wonderful poem...... A reading worth of gold......10/10. Regards Naseer
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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008
how did i miss this superb write...........10+
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Tanya Stanford 31 August 2008
Lovely use of words that make you think. Enjoyed the read.
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K K 06 March 2007
Very sweet poem...I doubt that she even noticed the beard :) KK
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Ndidi Ubogu 01 February 2006
this is a very good poem. I have read lots of your poem and really your works are inspiring......
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Lynette Dias-Gouveia 26 January 2006
I have to agree with Lawrence.. you encompass such a variety of themes and subjects with such ease and fluidity.. It is always wonderful reading your work.
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 04 September 2005
Such a very sweet sentimental poem......loved it!
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If there's any doubt that Mr. Nehrlich (Herbert) is not one of Poemhunter's most 'inventive' and consistent poets to come our way, let that hesitation be removed! He reveals..yet, another side of his awesome abilities! Thanks Herbert! There's got to be a Full Moon dispersing you with such wonderful text...of late! ...lol Very nice, Herbert! I really enjoy this one! L
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Anong All 21 June 2005
Enjoyable poem. The tone was quite soothing.
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Janice M Pickett 17 March 2005
Any way of removing Pauls stuff? ? Except the way I had to do it. Boy it's hard having to start all over again but better than having the messages trashed/ Hugs Jan
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Sue J Ashdown 27 February 2005
The sentiment in your poem is lovely, thank you Herbert. Sue.
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Louise Bizzari 20 February 2005
Weird - Weird -Weird Run on sentences are quite Limp - Limp - Limp Try to improve your prose and Dic - Dic - Dic In.... a...........D i c - T i o n a r y Thats of: courser \ (n) (1600) 1: a dog for coursing...... if there is one available Way Down Under? Isn't that where you are? ?
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Lenchen Elf 10 November 2004
Lovely, didn't need to polish up the heart though: -)
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knot Available 10 November 2004
A man who wants his woman to have the very best....can't argue with that. Inspiring Herbert. I like it.. adria
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