Office Work - Poem by David DeSantis

Onelia Avelar (4/30/2008 6:43:00 AM)

I was about to dedicate a poem to the office work, but you already did it in your unique eloquent manner (Report) Reply

R H (4/28/2008 8:29:00 AM)

A train of thought that escapes the confines of the office before being briefly halted by a burst of 'work work work' - the repitition of which contrasts with the superb imagery of the daydreams that interject the monotony. 'pitch fork eyes' - is just one image that leapt from the page. So glad I escaped office life when I did! A superb write David. j x (Report) Reply

Chuck Audette (4/22/2008 11:19:00 AM)

and now you've found the secret to staying sane; poetry on the sly! -c (Report) Reply

Flora Gillingham (4/10/2008 5:02:00 PM)

Only 40 years to go! But at least it will soon be the weekend! Nice poem.

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David Harris (4/7/2008 11:18:00 AM)

David, do I know what you mean. It can be a bit soul destroying at times and you wish you were somewhere else. Top marks and thanks for reminding me my friend.
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Vonda Overlie (4/3/2008 1:17:00 PM)

I love your thought patterns... you mkae me think deep! Glorious! (Report) Reply

Michael Campbell (4/3/2008 10:03:00 AM)

the repetition is a great idea. dull and bleh. love the last bit. (Report) Reply