louis rams

Gold Star - 10,626 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Old Age And Out To Pasture - Poem by louis rams

when is it that we are put out to pasture?
when our minds and bodies we can no longer master.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/29/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    while in our teens everything is great
    at 20 - everything seems to be fate
    at 30 - we're in our prime
    at 40- we become sublime
    at 50- we go downhill
    at 60- we lose our will
    at 70- they say it's time
    at 80- we've lost our mind
    at 90- it's our time to go
    at 100- your guess is as good as mine
    but we're working overtime..will have to depart at destined time....loveedtoreadthe timetable....10

    read mine............fine without you
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  • (10/7/2009 11:06:00 AM)

    Lol...nice work my brother....They say you are as old as you feel....get yourself a lovely blonde 21 year old......that should put the spring back in your step....Just kidding.............Great poem...This had me smiling all the way through....Refreshing piece..... (Report) Reply

  • (10/7/2009 10:50:00 AM)

    Very nice and funny too. I have to agree and at same time have to disagree too. Even at 20 or 60 we shouldn't lose our will.You made me to break into laugh with your ending line which apparently is true. High marks to the creativity you had shown in this piece. (Report) Reply

  • (10/7/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    I'm glad to see the fun side of you Louis. Enjoyed the creativity in the short, sweet life of it all.. (Report) Reply

  • (10/6/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    This is a very fun poem..
    Yet, the case is, I feel like going out at times. I mean life is not just a smooth boat ride isn't it? ? ? this is good... very well written..10+++/.. Liked your concept..

    regards
    Shan
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  • (10/6/2009 10:37:00 PM)

    in t he bible time some lived for more than 500 years.. good poem... i like it.. (Report) Reply

  • (10/6/2009 9:52:00 PM)

    yes we sure are over working...a lovely poem on the mind and body abilitues of each age....10 (Report) Reply








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