Friday, December 11, 2015

On a New Year's Eve Comments

Rating: 4.5

Infinity doesn't interest me

not altogether
anymore

...

June Jordan
COMMENTS
Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 December 2015

The trend has been set.......LONG poetry but APART FROM YOU WHO WILL READ IT? ? ? So many have started to post it I shall not lag behind long one I shall post too ere you all say poet eh poet em poet yep poet you know no poetry that won't be Glad i managed to read half of thee balance in dose two tomorrow

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Manonton Dalan 28 December 2015

very long poem... I wish I could write like that

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Susan Williams 28 December 2015

I love the repetition of certain lines within the poem and the repetition of the last two lines- it gives roundness, an aspect of repeated cycles like the seasons: all things are dear that disappear

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 December 2015

Wonderful and intriguing poem giving an inference that change is basic quality of life and with passing of time every thing changes too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Ramesh T A 28 December 2015

With the year coming to an end all things dear disappear for the new things to appear in the New Year!

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