Dee Daffodil


On Moonlit Night - Poem by Dee Daffodil

Beneath a rather sensuous moon
They made a trail through the snow
Through the woods
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  • (2/11/2008 9:07:00 AM)

    the first stanza sets the tone, excellent use of words to, personify the immagery, (Report)Reply

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  • (2/8/2007 12:11:00 PM)

    Very romantic and atmospheric. Wonderful, effortless flow to your rhymes, Dee. Loved it. -chuck (Report)Reply

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  • (2/2/2007 8:45:00 PM)

    Wonderfully warm and romantic snow tale Dee...... (Report)Reply

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  • (2/2/2007 5:31:00 AM)

    I was going to say, 'Better than at the beach! The sand gets everywhere! ! ' Then a horrible thought attached itself to those pine cones.Uuuurgh. Anyway, what colour did the moon paint the snow? (This is going on my favs.)
    Danny
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  • (1/31/2007 11:15:00 AM)

    Dee,
    I am not sure how you did that!
    Because, snow is really cold!
    But, from now on ...
    when I have to shovel that whiteness,
    I tend to think that it will have a
    certain sexy - ness to it!
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  • (1/31/2007 7:39:00 AM)

    Dear Dee, this blanket of snow has never felt so warm as your poem makes it so.
    Love David
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  • Brian Dorn (1/30/2007 11:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful write, Dee... enough said! !
    Brian
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  • (1/30/2007 8:27:00 AM)

    Dee, this is so beautiful, couldn't agree more with what Jim says, the snow and the moon, it's chock full of imagery! ! Delicious write..... HG: -) xx (Report)Reply

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  • (1/30/2007 5:30:00 AM)

    You create the setting and the atmostphere perfectly here Dee. Warm and romantic - intensified by the snow and the cold. Irresistible scenery. A very fine piece of poetry. One of your best. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/30/2007 4:49:00 AM)

    Warm, sensuous, melting write: -)
    Love...TO
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  • (1/29/2007 11:48:00 PM)

    Tis no wonder the snow just will not stay, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , lol
    Great write Dee, lots of passion of the season and of the snow, , , , , , , ,
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