Geoff Warden

Rookie (June 11 1962/ / London Ontario Canada)

On Wings Of Grace! ! - Poem by Geoff Warden

I do believe Sir Knight
there has been an oversight
for your glove has crossed my cheek
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  • Brian JaniBrian Jani (5/29/2014 1:09:00 PM)

    Geoff this is an amazing poem (Report)Reply

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  • Gregory Gunn (10/17/2006 4:17:00 PM)

    A rich, taut structure, full of form that is in keeping with the imaginative premise. The only trip-up is in the 5th tercet, line 3. It is one accented syllable too long; it may be improved by dropping the modifier silent to read, 'For whisper shall roar many a lion.' The added article a is grammatically correct. Hope this helps.

    Cheers,

    Greg
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  • Duncan Wyllie (6/12/2006 12:58:00 PM)

    That is the talk of those that hold the power to heal, it hurts, I know, but it is the only answer
    You are very brave indeed
    Love Duncan X
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  • Patricia Gale (6/5/2006 8:59:00 PM)

    Thy words ring peace through out this land. A knight of gentleness and peace.
    Me thinks this read is of a higher grander than mine humble pen could dare place.

    Patricia
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